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yellow bus roars through

yellow bus roars through blood leaves assail the stop sign.. geese traffic honk south

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/10/2010 4:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win Gerard ;) Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2010 12:16:00 PM
Many congrats Gerard on your win in S.K.A.T.'s fine contest with the gem >> James
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:27:00 AM
nice one, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Gerard in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:40:00 PM
Nicely done, Gerard!! congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:37:00 PM
Great work, Gerard. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Gerard
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:43:00 PM
Not what I expected*love your Haiku** Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:07:00 PM
Super congrats Gerard on your big win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy a big win .. with luv...
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Date: 8/26/2010 4:39:00 AM
well, well, well...for me perfection...(don't get too cocky my sis the english teacher says mine wouldn't even make it to the grocery store line in Jpan LOL) HUGS
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Date: 8/24/2010 3:14:00 PM
so GOOD (just NO period NEVER a period in haiku ;) H>M>) I'm going to fav it IF you promise to take off the period (I'll forgive you the title too haiku do not have titles the first line is used as the title & put 3 dots at the end of line 2 to indicate the cut) Faving & 7ing now. Please comment on blog? Light &Love H>M>
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:54:00 PM
hmmm, this seems to indicate a death. WAs it the poor goose, Gerard? Nice reading your work today. LEt me find another one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:09:00 PM
yes,, my Kid just starded school ,, good and sad,, I will miss him,,,enjoyed your poem. How you been GERARD.. good I hope,..p.d.
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:45:00 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Gerard and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. I thank you for all your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2010 5:55:00 AM
best of luck for the contest!!!!!!! impressive thoughts!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!!
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