Home » Poems » Gerard Keogh Jr. » Yellow Bus Roars Through

Yellow Bus Roars Through

yellow bus roars through blood leaves assail the stop sign.. geese traffic honk south

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/10/2010 4:24:00 AM

Congrats on your win Gerard ;) Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 9/2/2010 12:16:00 PM

Many congrats Gerard on your win in S.K.A.T.'s fine contest with the gem >> James

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/2/2010 8:27:00 AM

nice one, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 4:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Gerard in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2010 9:40:00 PM

Nicely done, Gerard!! congratulations. Luv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/1/2010 7:37:00 PM

Great work, Gerard. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 6:41:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Gerard

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2010 5:43:00 PM

Not what I expected*love your Haiku** Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2010 5:07:00 PM

Super congrats Gerard on your big win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy a big win .. with luv...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/26/2010 4:39:00 AM

well, well, well...for me perfection...(don't get too cocky my sis the english teacher says mine wouldn't even make it to the grocery store line in Jpan LOL) HUGS

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/24/2010 3:14:00 PM

so GOOD (just NO period NEVER a period in haiku ;) H>M>) I'm going to fav it IF you promise to take off the period (I'll forgive you the title too haiku do not have titles the first line is used as the title & put 3 dots at the end of line 2 to indicate the cut) Faving & 7ing now. Please comment on blog? Light &Love H>M>

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2010 6:54:00 PM

hmmm, this seems to indicate a death. WAs it the poor goose, Gerard? Nice reading your work today. LEt me find another one. LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2010 4:09:00 PM

yes,, my Kid just starded school ,, good and sad,, I will miss him,,,enjoyed your poem. How you been GERARD.. good I hope,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2010 10:45:00 AM

Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Gerard and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. I thank you for all your kind comments. Love, Carol

Vrushani Thaker

Date: 8/13/2010 5:55:00 AM

best of luck for the contest!!!!!!! impressive thoughts!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!!