Yellow Bus Roars Through

yellow bus roars through
blood leaves assail the stop sign..
geese traffic honk south
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 4:24 AM
Congrats on your win Gerard ;) Wilma
Fraser Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Many congrats Gerard on your win in S.K.A.T.'s fine contest with the gem >> James
Roberts Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 8:27 AM
nice one, congrats on your win in the contest
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on your win Gerard in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Nicely done, Gerard!! congratulations. Luv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 7:37 PM
Great work, Gerard. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest, Gerard
A  Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:43 PM
Not what I expected*love your Haiku** Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Super congrats Gerard on your big win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy a big win .. with luv...
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 4:39 AM
well, well, well...for me perfection...(don't get too cocky my sis the english teacher says mine wouldn't even make it to the grocery store line in Jpan LOL) HUGS
Guzzi Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 3:14 PM
so GOOD (just NO period NEVER a period in haiku ;) H>M>) I'm going to fav it IF you promise to take off the period (I'll forgive you the title too haiku do not have titles the first line is used as the title & put 3 dots at the end of line 2 to indicate the cut) Faving & 7ing now. Please comment on blog? Light &Love H>M>
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 6:54 PM
hmmm, this seems to indicate a death. WAs it the poor goose, Gerard? Nice reading your work today. LEt me find another one. LUv, Andrea
A   Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 4:09 PM
yes,, my Kid just starded school ,, good and sad,, I will miss him,,,enjoyed your poem. How you been GERARD.. good I hope,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Gerard and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. I thank you for all your kind comments. Love, Carol
Thaker Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:55 AM
best of luck for the contest!!!!!!! impressive thoughts!!!!!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!!
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