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Yellow Aura

At the close of the day, the air has a feel Produced by the aura that the sun creates And yellow seems to sift its way to appeal The evening has come and does implicate A calm spread of yellow permeates on out In a short time space allowable throughout This sensible color enlightens the night It covers the hillside with its gorgeous sight
Russell Sivey Contest: 'COLOR' Sponsor: FRANK H. 5/5/2013

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Date: 6/2/2013 8:27:00 PM
A beautiful captured sight. the glow, of a lifetime. Russell, i hope you do not mind that I am sending you soup mail... Amri
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Date: 5/6/2013 3:11:00 PM
Nothing new, beautiful aura poem, sure a win my friend. Loved it so smooth. Love Terry.
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Date: 5/6/2013 2:29:00 PM
I really like yellow. I think it is one of my favorite colors for personalities! you captured its essence.
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Date: 5/6/2013 9:15:00 AM
dear me, russell...you really excel here, i feel the lyrical tone of this piece is sooo right for the theme and your words reflect it nicely.... this tint of yellow is like a soft soothing tune for a gentle whiff of evening!..so enjoyable!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:13:00 AM
Russell truly wonderful image you've conveyed. I love how the day comes to an end with a yellow aura sensible enlightens the night. Great usage of a color for this contest. Best wishes. Connie
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Date: 5/6/2013 6:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I like the color yellow and those sunsets of yellow or gold are beautiful..Thanks for stopping by..I have finished my work "In The Garden Of Eden"..Thanks again for the review..Sara
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Date: 5/6/2013 12:34:00 AM
Very enchanting, Russell. Your words capture that aura so well. :)
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Date: 5/5/2013 10:46:00 PM
Beautiful word picture Russell. I am going to see yellow in a different light now.
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