Russell Sivey Poet Rispetto

Yellow Aura

At the close of the day, the air has a feel
Produced by the aura that the sun creates
And yellow seems to sift its way to appeal
The evening has come and does implicate
A calm spread of yellow permeates on out
In a short time space allowable throughout
This sensible color enlightens the night
It covers the hillside with its gorgeous sight

Russell Sivey

Contest: 'COLOR'
Sponsor: FRANK H.

5/5/2013

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Poet Destroyer A June 2, 2013 at 8:27 PM A beautiful captured sight. the glow, of a lifetime. Russell, i hope you do not mind that I am sending you soup mail... Amri

Therese Bacha May 6, 2013 at 3:11 PM Nothing new, beautiful aura poem, sure a win my friend. Loved it so smooth. Love Terry.

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2013 at 2:29 PM I really like yellow. I think it is one of my favorite colors for personalities! you captured its essence.

Nette Onclaud May 6, 2013 at 9:15 AM dear me, russell...you really excel here, i feel the lyrical tone of this piece is sooo right for the theme and your words reflect it nicely.... this tint of yellow is like a soft soothing tune for a gentle whiff of evening!..so enjoyable!..:) huggs

Connie Gildersleeve May 6, 2013 at 7:13 AM Russell truly wonderful image you've conveyed. I love how the day comes to an end with a yellow aura sensible enlightens the night. Great usage of a color for this contest. Best wishes. Connie

Sara Kendrick May 6, 2013 at 6:08 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I like the color yellow and those sunsets of yellow or gold are beautiful..Thanks for stopping by..I have finished my work "In The Garden Of Eden"..Thanks again for the review..Sara

Eileen Manassian May 6, 2013 at 12:34 AM Very enchanting, Russell. Your words capture that aura so well. :)

Tahera Mannan May 5, 2013 at 10:46 PM Beautiful word picture Russell. I am going to see yellow in a different light now.