Yellow

A field of yellow flowers melts into the sunset 
Birds sing and bees on  the wing 
A perfect summers day 
sneeze !  



contest entry pic 2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Cheers right back to you.... Linda
A   Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Stephen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
Pennell  Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 1:37 AM
cheers pd
La France Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:22 AM
Stephen, you have penned a perfect summer day, sneeze ! CONGRATULATIONS
Pennell  Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Thank you such nice remarks now is it tears or the hay fever I have got :-)
Selfa Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 12:07 AM
Congratulations Stephen on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS
Pennell  Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:55 AM
thank you
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:06 AM
Stephen, I loved the beauty and the reality in your entry. Congratulations on your super win!
Pennell  Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:29 AM
thanks tried to twist it a bit
Roper Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Stephen, great imagery I would be the one sneezing!Hugs dear friend
Pennell  Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:30 AM
oh hay fever nightmare lol
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 7:30 PM
HA. what a great last line that was. Congrats. Hope it scored high.
Pennell  Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:32 AM
cheers it did made silent one's list
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 6:11 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Pennell  Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:33 AM
thank you
Scars Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Stephen, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
Pennell  Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:34 AM
thank you
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 6:00 AM
I'm glad I don't suffer from hayfever - great take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Pennell  Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 6:12 AM
lol spot on silent ones going to run out a colours soon which will be a shame good fun :-)
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