Yellow

A field of yellow flowers melts into the sunset 
Birds sing and bees on  the wing 
A perfect summers day 
sneeze !  



contest entry pic 2

funfree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 1:37:00 AM

Cheers right back to you.... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:29:00 PM

Stephen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/15/2016 1:37:00 AM

cheers pd

Constance La France

Date: 3/7/2016 6:22:00 AM

Stephen, you have penned a perfect summer day, sneeze ! CONGRATULATIONS

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/7/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thank you such nice remarks now is it tears or the hay fever I have got :-)

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 12:07:00 AM

Congratulations Stephen on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/6/2016 2:55:00 AM

thank you

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2016 2:06:00 AM

Stephen, I loved the beauty and the reality in your entry. Congratulations on your super win!

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/5/2016 4:29:00 AM

thanks tried to twist it a bit

Eve Roper

Date: 3/4/2016 11:00:00 PM

Congratulations in the contest yellow win, Stephen, great imagery I would be the one sneezing!Hugs dear friend

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/5/2016 4:30:00 AM

oh hay fever nightmare lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2016 7:30:00 PM

HA. what a great last line that was. Congrats. Hope it scored high.

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/5/2016 4:32:00 AM

cheers it did made silent one's list

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2016 6:11:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/5/2016 4:33:00 AM

thank you

Beautiful Scars

Date: 3/4/2016 4:21:00 PM

Stephen, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/5/2016 4:34:00 AM

thank you

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2016 6:00:00 AM

I'm glad I don't suffer from hayfever - great take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell
Date: 3/4/2016 6:12:00 AM

lol spot on silent ones going to run out a colours soon which will be a shame good fun :-)

Yellow

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