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Yellow

Daffodils nodding Their faces shy and reserved Such tender beauty Soft butter moonlight tryst Our innocence lost 5/13/13

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/22/2013 7:14:00 AM

Lovely BG. Many congrats for this great win.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 5/22/2013 6:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win! I just remember Wordsworth's "Daffodils"- what a beauty!

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/21/2013 8:55:00 AM

breathtaking, congrats on your win Barbara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2013 7:41:00 AM

Very creative and expressive winning work..Congrats...Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/21/2013 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your well deserve win. A beautiful and delicate Tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie

Red Omara

Date: 5/21/2013 2:17:00 AM

Congratulations, Barbara. Such a beautiful piece deserved it.-Red

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/21/2013 1:09:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Barbara, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 12:45:00 AM

barbara, it was that soft butter moonlight that did it for me. I just LOVE that image! and yellow is so sweet. Congrats for your win.

Joseph May

Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 PM

awesome ....congrats on your win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 9:00:00 PM

this is an awesome choice of yellow, for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/20/2013 8:14:00 PM

oh.......I love this, Barbara! That last line.......those daffodils lost their shyness?? :) So pretty! Congratulations!

Daver Austin

Date: 5/15/2013 6:56:00 AM

Thanks for that turn around the dance floor. How better to lose innocence, eh? Love, daver

Red Omara

Date: 5/14/2013 4:08:00 PM

Seems a very nice Tanka to me, Barbara. But Blue was my first (I'm sure it must've showed).-Red

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/14/2013 11:59:00 AM

The tenderness of a noble soul revealed! Fantastic! Thank you!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/13/2013 10:45:00 AM

so poetic! i really like this...