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Yellow


Daffodils nodding
Their faces shy and reserved
Such tender beauty
Soft butter moonlight tryst
Our innocence lost



5/13/13

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Tahera Mannan

May 22, 2013 at 7:14 AM

Lovely BG. Many congrats for this great win.

Modupe Sefunmi

May 22, 2013 at 6:14 AM

Congrats on your win! I just remember Wordsworth's "Daffodils"- what a beauty!

Francine Roberts

May 21, 2013 at 8:55 AM

breathtaking, congrats on your win Barbara

Sara Kendrick

May 21, 2013 at 7:41 AM

Very creative and expressive winning work..Congrats...Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

May 21, 2013 at 7:18 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your well deserve win. A beautiful and delicate Tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie

Red Omara

May 21, 2013 at 2:17 AM

Congratulations, Barbara. Such a beautiful piece deserved it.-Red

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

May 21, 2013 at 1:09 AM

Many congratulations on your win Barbara, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2013 at 12:45 AM

barbara, it was that soft butter moonlight that did it for me. I just LOVE that image! and yellow is so sweet. Congrats for your win.

Joseph May

May 20, 2013 at 9:14 PM

awesome ....congrats on your win

Poet Destroyer A

May 20, 2013 at 9:00 PM

this is an awesome choice of yellow, for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

Carrie Richards

May 20, 2013 at 8:14 PM

oh.......I love this, Barbara! That last line.......those daffodils lost their shyness?? :) So pretty! Congratulations!

Daver Austin

May 15, 2013 at 6:56 AM

Thanks for that turn around the dance floor. How better to lose innocence, eh? Love, daver

Red Omara

May 14, 2013 at 4:08 PM

Seems a very nice Tanka to me, Barbara. But Blue was my first (I'm sure it must've showed).-Red

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 14, 2013 at 11:59 AM

The tenderness of a noble soul revealed! Fantastic! Thank you!

Ilene Bauer

May 13, 2013 at 10:45 AM

so poetic! i really like this...

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