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Yellow

yellow
the sun’s warmth
on my face
a smile
  free at last

5/11/13
for andrea's color tanka contest

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Carrie Richards

June 4, 2013 at 4:50 PM

I love the warm feeling this poem brings with it!! Charming! And ps.....a big thank you for my placement in your senryu contest. You had such wonderful entries, so I am honored. Thank you!!

Tahera Mannan

May 22, 2013 at 7:19 AM

Beautiful Many congrats for this great win.

Nette Onclaud

May 21, 2013 at 11:00 AM

you are sunshine, susan..congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

Connie Gildersleeve

May 21, 2013 at 9:13 AM

Congratulation on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Francine Roberts

May 21, 2013 at 9:12 AM

short but sweet, congrats on your win Susan

Sara Kendrick

May 21, 2013 at 8:50 AM

Unique winning work..Creative way to go..Congrats...Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

May 21, 2013 at 1:13 AM

Many congratulations on your win Susan, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2013 at 12:52 AM

I really love how you ended yours, susan, and I appreciate your modern way of doing your tanka. I do adore that yellow sun on my face and you guessed that so well about me. congrats. Luv, Andrea