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Yearning For You

I lounge in a chair, waiting. I yearn as I watch your delightful dance, guitars strumming, flute haunting, xylophone resonating. You swirl, twirl, pause, stoop, pirouette, spin as I’m glued to my chair. Your skirt whirls, arms flail, hips swing. You twist, swivel as beads of sweat trickle down your face, like a rivulet of emotion, smudge your make-up, but still untiring, the show goes on. Your eyes gleam, your face beams, I hear your laugh. Still I sit and wait, The music slows in a dulcet melody, I yearn to dance with you and hold you tight, But all I can do is wait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/6/2021 1:11:00 PM
Ahh!! Very descriptive of the moment penned in this one. I am sure your loved one loved reading it. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 11/22/2020 10:55:00 AM
Victor, I haven't forgotten you, business busy and falling behind with my comments and replies. A wonderful write, your time will come. enjoy your time here my friend, I know how desperately you want to hold her tight. Loved this write. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/13/2020 5:45:00 AM
"...a dulcet melody,..." Nicely stated Victor. Sweet, nostalgic, typical you. Linda
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Date: 11/13/2020 5:39:00 AM
Delightful and melancholy at the same time. You flash the scene in front of the reader with exquisite detail and imagery. A talented write, as always, Victor.
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Date: 11/13/2020 3:58:00 AM
This is beautifully sad my friend and yes, all you can do is wait, but you do not know when that time will be...
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Date: 11/13/2020 2:47:00 AM
aww Victor beautiful but so pack with emotion, hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2020 1:21:00 AM
One thing I've never mastered is dancing, we have strictly come dancing here on tv. They're amazing to watch. Tom
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Date: 11/12/2020 9:34:00 PM
Your beautiful imagery really brought the dancer to life, Victor. Delightful! :)
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Date: 11/12/2020 7:54:00 PM
I love how you always end your poems with a twist, Victor. The show must go on ;)
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Date: 11/12/2020 7:42:00 PM
Great imagery.
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Date: 11/12/2020 12:20:00 PM
Hello Victor, I can picture you watching her dance. Waiting for the moment to be with her. How are you? Doing well I hope. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 11/12/2020 12:19:00 PM
- She dances for you :) - You should have someone to dance with, Victor :) - A lovely poem ... your miss is easy to understand, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2020 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Victor ~ oh to be able to dance like that... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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