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Yearning For Home

My
heart yearns; I'm
missing home ~
missing home...
A warm loving womb
for my heart and
soul;
For better future
life, I left and
roam.
Gem mosaic roles
ladder a top goal;
Like one live music
band we rock and
roll;

Laughter and tears
shed shadows every
dome
Changes marked
between years, I
miss to match...
My heart yearns;
I'm missing home~
missing home...
Dreams upholded
round high from
pearl deep catch
Each fiber of my
heart 'til death
attach.

(c) Olive Eloisa
2:51pm: June 30,2014

Quintain (English)
rhyme scheme: ababb
(which I chose..
:O?)
Quintain (Sicilian)
rhyme scheme: ababa 
Sponsor	Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name	Hard
Choices 
6th place, to God be
the greatest glory..
:)

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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James Fraser Date: 12/10/2014 12:31:00 PM Another wonderful write Olive. I've fallen in love with your poetry - James :)x Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/10/2014 10:43:00 PM thanks much JAmes.. :)!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/23/2014 5:57:00 PM thank you for supporting my comments always Login to Reply

Greg Hoffman Date: 7/5/2014 9:58:00 AM Congrats on your win,nicely done Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/6/2014 4:45:00 AM THANK YOU VERY much.. :)

Ct Duet Date: 7/4/2014 11:14:00 AM Congrats on the sweet win :)...many hugs from a far :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/6/2014 4:44:00 AM tHANK YOU .. :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/4/2014 9:57:00 AM Olive,, Congratulations, life's all about the hard choices we face on a daily base. Have a happy 4th of July... LUV LINDA Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/5/2014 10:32:00 AM Thank You Lolli Linda.. :D belated likewise.. :) i hope you will be happy always.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/4/2014 9:40:00 AM True Olive ! A beauty , home sweet home !congrats on great win! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/5/2014 10:29:00 AM i hope so Dr. Upma that i'll be home soon... :D

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/4/2014 8:25:00 AM A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, Olive Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/5/2014 10:28:00 AM Thank you Dr. Ram.. :) God bless you. :D

Tim Smith Date: 6/30/2014 11:48:00 PM I can only imagine how difficult it is to be away....hugs to you my sweet :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/1/2014 6:10:00 AM :) have you tried Tim.? Hugs too ..:) thanks much..:)

Arthur Vaso Date: 6/30/2014 11:36:00 PM This is such a beautiful poem I think anyone who has been away from home for long time can relate too!! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/1/2014 6:09:00 AM Oh yes Buddy Art..:) have you once be away? Thanks for the drop by..:)

Paul Callus Date: 6/30/2014 6:23:00 PM Hi Olive_eloi...love the write and the yearning behind it. I can understand. May you soon be able to return home and reunite with loved ones whom you miss so much. This is not an impossible dream!:)) // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 7/4/2014 3:30:00 PM Congratulations on another worthy win Olive_eloi :) time to celebrate!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/1/2014 6:08:00 AM Yes not so impossible dream Paul...:) but I mean more than the home itself and the situation itself..:) remember.. Home is where the heart is...........;)

Leon Datu Date: 6/30/2014 12:44:00 PM I am softened by your need to come home. Bittersweet poetry likened to country music! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/1/2014 6:04:00 AM Thank you for your drop by..:)