Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Quintain (English)

Yearning For Home

My
heart yearns; I'm
missing home ~
missing home...
A warm loving womb
for my heart and
soul;
For better future
life, I left and
roam.
Gem mosaic roles
ladder a top goal;
Like one live music
band we rock and
roll;

Laughter and tears
shed shadows every
dome
Changes marked
between years, I
miss to match...
My heart yearns;
I'm missing home~
missing home...
Dreams upholded
round high from
pearl deep catch
Each fiber of my
heart 'til death
attach.

(c) Olive Eloisa
2:51pm: June 30,2014

Quintain (English)
rhyme scheme: ababb
(which I chose..
:O?)
Quintain (Sicilian)
rhyme scheme: ababa 
Sponsor	Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name	Hard
Choices 
6th place, to God be
the greatest glory..
:)

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James Fraser December 10, 2014 at 12:31 PM Another wonderful write Olive. I've fallen in love with your poetry - James :)x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2014 at 10:43 PM thanks much JAmes.. :)!

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 5:57 PM thank you for supporting my comments always

Greg Hoffman July 5, 2014 at 9:58 AM Congrats on your win,nicely done Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2014 at 4:45 AM THANK YOU VERY much.. :)

Ct Duet July 4, 2014 at 11:14 AM Congrats on the sweet win :)...many hugs from a far :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 6, 2014 at 4:44 AM tHANK YOU .. :)

Poet Destroyer A July 4, 2014 at 9:57 AM Olive,, Congratulations, life's all about the hard choices we face on a daily base. Have a happy 4th of July... LUV LINDA Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 10:32 AM Thank You Lolli Linda.. :D belated likewise.. :) i hope you will be happy always.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 4, 2014 at 9:40 AM True Olive ! A beauty , home sweet home !congrats on great win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 10:29 AM i hope so Dr. Upma that i'll be home soon... :D

Dr.Ram Mehta July 4, 2014 at 8:25 AM A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 5, 2014 at 10:28 AM Thank you Dr. Ram.. :) God bless you. :D

Tim Smith June 30, 2014 at 11:48 PM I can only imagine how difficult it is to be away....hugs to you my sweet :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 1, 2014 at 6:10 AM :) have you tried Tim.? Hugs too ..:) thanks much..:)

Arthur Vaso June 30, 2014 at 11:36 PM This is such a beautiful poem I think anyone who has been away from home for long time can relate too!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 1, 2014 at 6:09 AM Oh yes Buddy Art..:) have you once be away? Thanks for the drop by..:)

Paul Callus June 30, 2014 at 6:23 PM Hi Olive_eloi...love the write and the yearning behind it. I can understand. May you soon be able to return home and reunite with loved ones whom you miss so much. This is not an impossible dream!:)) // paul Paul Callus July 4, 2014 at 3:30 PM Congratulations on another worthy win Olive_eloi :) time to celebrate!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 1, 2014 at 6:08 AM Yes not so impossible dream Paul...:) but I mean more than the home itself and the situation itself..:) remember.. Home is where the heart is...........;)

Leon Datu June 30, 2014 at 12:44 PM I am softened by your need to come home. Bittersweet poetry likened to country music! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 1, 2014 at 6:04 AM Thank you for your drop by..:)