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Yearning For God

Yearning for hope shadows her thoughts Blazing through her heart and soul Her stomach is all tied up in knots She longs for love that will make her whole Grief constricts her arid throat with worry Life has given her so much to contend with Will God forgive the anger and fury? She wonders if true love is only a myth Black sorrow beckons to her gloomy plans Whispering despair instead of compassion The empty church she takes in as she scans Her clammy skin has all but changed to ashen Breaths of mourning curse her thoughts of hope Brilliant light seems to pour from the pews Will she ever find a sincerely good way to cope? Could this be the time when she will choose? Finally, her heart gives in to the radiant joy Flaming across the church with brilliant poise Her heart is filled with a love nothing can destroy Grace has saved her soul from the hate filled noise A Rhyme Story-Poem With Eyes On Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose December 16, 2020
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Seeker Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 10:46 PM
Superb, Regina! Congrats on your win!
Ermine Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Regina, it's hard to express how incredible I find your writing. It seems your pen works wonders of its own accord, never tiring. Rhyme is reliable, lines purposeful, emotion leaching from each stanza. Huge Congratulations on your Win here!!
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December 25, 2020 at 2:56 AM
Congrats! Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "She longs for love that will make her whole." I think everyone wants this. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings................
Kauffman Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Really very special Gina! The contrast in the temptation to give up and the final "giving in" to love is so well articulated! Congratulations on your win! So happy to see this on the winners list! Merry Christmas my friend!
Logan Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on this enlightening 2nd place winner, Regina.
Mitra Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Congrats dear Regina on a lovely take of this piece....much love and hugs.
Roper Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 7:34 AM
Great story, Regina, congratulations, on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve
Rose  Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Dear Regina, isn't it amazing what Grace can do in a moment of prayer. Your poem touched me deeply, Thank you for joining my contest, congratulations on your 2nd place, Love and Light, Your Mystic R.
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 7:57 PM
Kind of scary there for a few stanzas, my friend. Sounds like the subject could use a few booster shots of faith along with the Covid vaccine. Here's to Faith and Belief, Gershon
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