Yearning

Asleep, his dreams are vivid of this girl, who dances nude
Awake, the image of her without clothes, enhances yearning

She passes by him, in five inch heels, her gyrating hips, his fancy
He turns to greet her, in a split second, that chance, a yearning

At the end of a long day; “Happy Hour” at hand, he glances at his Timex
He now knows he’s a stalker, but who cares, he's in a trance, yearning

As she steps off the elevator, he sucks in his breath, and prances 
Passing by, she looks right through him, which only advances yearning

She stops at the traffic light; it’s just turned red, she's sporting proud stances
Should he approach her? Will she befriend him? Then he thinks of his finances, yearning 

~*~
A collaboration with Audrey Carey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/14/2010 9:42:00 AM
Difficult form and you both did it right! Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:16:00 AM
Great collab!!!!! enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 4/13/2010 2:32:00 AM
interestingly romantic Ghazal, dear Jimmy and Audrey. Good luck in the contest. All the very best, Iolanda
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Date: 4/12/2010 9:06:00 PM
Roamntic poem well penned
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Date: 4/12/2010 7:09:00 PM
Well if this isn't number one .. I don't know whose will be... this is a marvelous collab and Jared will simply luv luv luv this entry.. so happy u decided to accept his Ghazal challenge to boost his ego a little too... good luck to u both...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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