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Yearning

Asleep, his dreams are vivid of this girl, who dances nude Awake, the image of her without clothes, enhances yearning She passes by him, in five inch heels, her gyrating hips, his fancy He turns to greet her, in a split second, that chance, a yearning At the end of a long day; “Happy Hour” at hand, he glances at his Timex He now knows he’s a stalker, but who cares, he's in a trance, yearning As she steps off the elevator, he sucks in his breath, and prances Passing by, she looks right through him, which only advances yearning She stops at the traffic light; it’s just turned red, she's sporting proud stances Should he approach her? Will she befriend him? Then he thinks of his finances, yearning ~*~ A collaboration with Audrey Carey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/14/2010 9:42:00 AM
Difficult form and you both did it right! Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:16:00 AM
Great collab!!!!! enjoyed by Simone
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Date: 4/13/2010 2:32:00 AM
interestingly romantic Ghazal, dear Jimmy and Audrey. Good luck in the contest. All the very best, Iolanda
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Date: 4/12/2010 9:06:00 PM
Roamntic poem well penned
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Date: 4/12/2010 7:09:00 PM
Well if this isn't number one .. I don't know whose will be... this is a marvelous collab and Jared will simply luv luv luv this entry.. so happy u decided to accept his Ghazal challenge to boost his ego a little too... good luck to u both...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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