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koi not to be caught fisher breathed a sullen sigh pond veiled in lilies 8/6/2018 captcha of my log in ; kfp (4=f) Poetry Contest: haiku captcha Sponsored by: Harry Horsman

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Date: 9/19/2018 6:40:00 AM
I really loved this one Eve!Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2018 3:03:00 AM
like this a lot - classic haiku with depth
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Date: 9/18/2018 3:02:00 AM
A lovely winning entry, Eve! Impressed by the fisher's 'sullen sigh' and the end line. Congratulations for a merited podium finish. Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/17/2018 9:00:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your 2nd place win with your delightful fisher vs koi haiku :)
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Date: 9/17/2018 8:19:00 PM
Congrats on your silver medal win, Eve.
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Date: 9/17/2018 5:09:00 AM
Love this Eve. Congratulations on your 2nd place in my contest..Harry
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Date: 8/10/2018 5:49:00 PM
very nicely done with those letters, Eve!
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Date: 8/7/2018 1:16:00 PM
Love 'pond veiled in lilies,' so lovely!
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Date: 8/7/2018 7:03:00 AM
Clever..well done, Eve.
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Date: 8/7/2018 5:48:00 AM
This poem is very cool! i like it!:)
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Date: 8/6/2018 11:18:00 PM
intricate, like...the oldt 'modest' watch
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Date: 8/6/2018 8:10:00 PM
Ah cute! well done Eve!!!!
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