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Ye Old Jalopy

Ye old jalopy of the junkyard spiffed up with spinning tires hydroplaning of the weather vane no ejection seat no buckle to fumble open air hit from behind the child held with grandma’s wrought iron arms grandpa’s at the pearly gates chooses lemon-lime 7/8/2018

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Charles Messina

Date: 7/28/2019 6:54:00 AM

Excellent Kim. Lovely take on the contest. Congratulations on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2019 7:23:00 AM

Thank you, Charles!

Craig Cornish

Date: 7/28/2019 6:53:00 AM

So much to ponder in so few but artistic words

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2019 7:22:00 AM

Thank you so much, Craig, for the placement and the kind words.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2019 12:06:00 AM

I love your unique take on the contest Kim. This is remarkable! Congratulations on your win! xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2019 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Connie!

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/27/2019 9:44:00 PM

Vivid imagery, Kim. Congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 10:00:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/27/2019 3:34:00 PM

Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2019 5:54:00 PM

Thank you, Janice!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/9/2019 3:53:00 PM

Good one, Kim...I just liked hearing the word, jalopy. Have not heard that in years. I wonder the hundreds of kids that die worldwide with texting parents? And ..in the Attest CRV's, too.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2019 8:26:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!