Yawn, Ho-Hum

Never been to Norway nor to Finland or Sweden After all, my wife Eve and I left the Garden of Eden

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/31/2025 4:19:00 PM

just clever! enjoyed!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/31/2025 4:10:00 PM

To go where exactly? Where did y'all chose to reside? Very cute, cute one. I've sent you a soup mail. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/31/2025 11:22:00 AM

So concise and clever, Gershon. Janice

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/31/2025 10:22:00 AM

Hello Gershon, Ah! You will remember tjois place n your memory. LOL. Enjoy your dcahy mgt friend. /Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2025 6:03:00 AM

A bit funny, yet somber too! Well done!

John Fleming

Date: 7/31/2025 4:18:00 AM

I went to a Nordic country once, Denmark, for an extended fishing holiday...what an amazingly neat and tidy place! I swear to God, I never even saw a single discarded cigarette-butt lying on the pavement. Bet its not like that now. Nice one, Gershon. :) john

Bill Baker

Date: 7/30/2025 9:43:00 PM

Dear Adam, sorry about the apple thing. I know y'all got kicked out and now we're paying the price. I know you did the best you could to obey God, but oops. Nice one gw. I like it! BB