Yasmin the Fair

Across the sea she waits unfree and writes
of her friendships and of true harmony. 
Her children and loyalty keep her from flight
a poet matron married for her great beauty.

Her mind soars and eyes devour old tomes.
learning to write odes and etherees
she leaves her shell for foreign homes
delighting in words of camaraderie.

The heat of Saudi, the thrill of Mumbai 
the feel of silk saris under gray skies
all of these does she gift to such as I
and from her captive perch we hear her cry.

May the written word always be the key
which brings our fairest Yasmin here to me.


*A tribute verse to the budding skill of Yasmin Khan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Taylor Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Congrats, Deb. Awesome. Great job, my friend. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Francine's "Tribute By Sonnet" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 3:20 AM
Debbie, congrats on your win, an excellent choice of poet to do a dedication to...David
Roberts Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 10:47 PM
congrats Debbie on your 9th place win with this tribute to our soup's beautiful Yasmin
Richards Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 5:05 PM
How can one not be heartwarmed when reading this poem, and then to read Yasmin's response....brought a tear! :)
Song Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 12:14 PM
I just read Cyndi's note about this poem below mine...I echo her thots too! Great job!
Song Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Debbie,...Yasmin's growth is def something that is easy to see, but when the words come from someone as encouraging and as experienced as you, how could she not grow ? You have held up her poetry pen like Aaron to Moses on many occasions...I just feel it in my bones...You are one of her inspirations and mentors...Bless u for your impact on us all. Love ya Debbie...Gwendolen
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June 16, 2012 at 8:29 AM
Oh, Debbie. This is wonderful. Such a perfect rendering! When great words match intention, spirit, loving thoughts, to me this makes the BEST poetry. Hugs to both of you! Cyndi
Poet Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 1:36 PM
WOW!!A great tribute to her!
Williams Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 7:00 AM
Deb, a great sonnet, and who could be a more worthy recipient....good luck...David
Onclaud Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 9:28 PM
a fitting, flowing tribute to one of my "bestest" friends here on soup, debbie... yes, she's a powerhouse!... shimmering!..:) huggs!
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June 14, 2012 at 7:34 PM
A WONDERFUL TRIBUTE,, TO A WELL LOVED POET FRIENDS OF MINE,,I HOPE.... XOX..PD
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 2:34 PM
A beautiful poem for sweet Yasmin, hope she like it to. - oxox Anne-Lise
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