Yard Sale To Buy Our Groceries

fescue undulates across the pasture
a big yard sale sign pivots
back and forth; greetings, spend!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/29/2010 11:03:00 AM
the few words up there i can really feel outstanding
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Date: 9/28/2010 12:14:00 PM
the garage sale sounds good, but the reason does not. have a nice one doris,..p.d.
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Date: 9/27/2010 9:27:00 PM
A lovely depiction. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:52:00 PM
Cute one, Doris, and I figured you were describing something like Atlanta. I have BEEN there!!!
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Date: 9/25/2010 3:18:00 PM
very nice write have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 9/25/2010 2:21:00 PM
Hope that the sales was good..Yes, I saw the star or planet and the sun was still high even though it was starting the setting mode...Have a great evening ...Mom
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:01:00 AM
Great write, Doris, enjoyed the read of your Kimo!...Gert
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Date: 9/24/2010 10:38:00 PM
Nicely done Doris ... nice to read you again thanks for the kind comment on my poem love Jayne
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:10:00 PM
You've spun a new one on me again Doris, I have to check this form out looks like my type. Thanks for sharing introduction of form. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/24/2010 2:24:00 PM
A clever and witty kimo, Doris. This is a form I've never tried, but you work very well in it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2010 1:21:00 PM
Interesting form Doris and the title played along with the content. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;)
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Date: 9/24/2010 1:16:00 PM
Cool Kimo girlfriend. I thought a Kimo was what the Japanese women wore to bed. silly me
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