Yard Sale To Buy Our Groceries

fescue undulates across the pasture
a big yard sale sign pivots
back and forth; greetings, spend!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pearson Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 11:03 AM
the few words up there i can really feel outstanding
A   Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:14 PM
the garage sale sounds good, but the reason does not. have a nice one doris,..p.d.
Mannan Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 9:27 PM
A lovely depiction. Thanks for the comments.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Cute one, Doris, and I figured you were describing something like Atlanta. I have BEEN there!!!
Murphy Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 3:18 PM
very nice write have a great weekend faleshia
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Hope that the sales was good..Yes, I saw the star or planet and the sun was still high even though it was starting the setting mode...Have a great evening ...Mom
Knop Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Great write, Doris, enjoyed the read of your Kimo!...Gert
Eggins Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 10:38 PM
Nicely done Doris ... nice to read you again thanks for the kind comment on my poem love Jayne
Freeman Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:10 PM
You've spun a new one on me again Doris, I have to check this form out looks like my type. Thanks for sharing introduction of form. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 2:24 PM
A clever and witty kimo, Doris. This is a form I've never tried, but you work very well in it! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Interesting form Doris and the title played along with the content. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;)
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Cool Kimo girlfriend. I thought a Kimo was what the Japanese women wore to bed. silly me
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