Yakshi the Whore 1

This succubus is from our local lore
Lovely and wicked she could turn at will
Yakshi  her name feared as a deadly whore
A rare talent, she got ,to dupe and kill.

She lives on top of her palmyrah tree
At the midnight hour, down to earth, she climbs
Waits for her prey, a wayfarer, weary
Closes  in on  him, asking for quicklime.

Cute, white-clad, exuding  jasmine’s  fragrance
She sweet-talks her prey to a lust-filled night
Step ,they, into her mansion for romance
Where the luckless chap is in for a fright.

Reveals, she,  her real form,  fearsome, ghoulish
Sucks out all blood from his chest she just split
Devours all his flesh and bones with relish
Teeth, nails, hair is all, in the morn , left.


At times her pick is a youth full of zest
In his dream she comes as partner in sex
Through nights he loses all blood to this pest
Wears thin and takes ill to become an “Ex”.

                             *
Like once she did, on trees, she lives no more
But could, in cartons and cans, lie in wait
In stuff that we consume and just adore
As safety-norm-transgressions we underrate
Under global brand names which serve as baits.
                              *

Contest:" Creatures  of the night   
28-08-1

Won second place in the above contest.

Entry for Roy Jerden's contest on 25 May 13
For Kelly Deschler's contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/9/2012 5:49:00 PM
A very interesting write, Jag. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/8/2012 2:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win.Sara
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:19:00 AM
JAG,,... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:19:00 PM
congrats Jag on a superb write and win luv for a unique and creative poem .. hope all is well with u ..
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Date: 3/6/2012 6:08:00 PM
Very good!!! Love this Always Michael
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Date: 12/22/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "In The Mood" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2011 12:27:00 AM
She sounds horrible!!! Good job. I see how you won in the creatures contest too! congrats with your win in PD's contest.
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,S,nair
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Date: 9/6/2011 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Linda-Marie's "CREATURES" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "CREATURES" of the Night! poetry contest sponsored by Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. CR
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Date: 9/4/2011 2:06:00 PM
love the title! she sounds like what we call a succubus. congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/4/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win here blessings from Paul
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Date: 9/4/2011 4:08:00 AM
hey jag congrats on your win, loved this first time round, am honoured to share 2nd place with you..David
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Date: 9/4/2011 4:07:00 AM
congratulations on your place in the contest. She sound a real scary one this yakshi of yours. well done. regards Marg..
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Date: 9/3/2011 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, S. Nair
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Date: 9/3/2011 6:32:00 PM
CONGRATS JAG ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS WONDERFUL 'CREATURE' OF THE NIGHT LUV..THANKXXX...SUPER WRITE..
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:36:00 PM
Hope Linda can hold her sides together when she reads this fun verse. You certainly have a handle on the ghoulish stuff.
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:49:00 AM
scary as scary can be.. 'til the last line that's so funny I'll be laughin my ass off 'til tomorrow. Way to write, jag! ~N
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:08:00 PM
what a title for this creature of the night, S. Sure to please Linda! Wicked wicked lady! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/28/2011 1:21:00 PM
hey Jag, love this. good luck, David
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:48:00 AM
Alluring and scary tale, S.Nair
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:46:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Jag.. good luck luv.. this one sounds like it will be fantastic when I read fully at judging time.. appreciate...
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:12:00 AM
Yakshi just wants some baksheesh. Then she'll go away. Great story; great poem.
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