Ya Sure! You Betcha!

building up to a
well then
could hardly
wait a minute
cantcha see?
it's gonna be
pretty quick now!
jus' in time!
holy cow!
Halsey Hall!
seems to me
okay then
'boughta minute
geeze louise!
hope ya know!
'tween you an me
jus' cuz ya said so
ain't gonna be!
but jus' in case
somebody butts in
to letcha know
that yer ok!
smile at 'im
and say
sure!
* how sum of us.... 'Up-North' here talk!! (but not me! you betcha!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Scoville Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 10:05 PM
Oh my Jimbo this was a fun read and makes me think of all my southern sayings and slang. Y'all come back now ya hear?......The Southern Belle
Kurth Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Good Golly, James, you got it! I have family in Wisconsin and Minnesota so I know the accent well, you betcha! Krista
Gorelick Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 11:21 AM
Cute..you betcha! BG
Higgins Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 11:01 AM
Did Sara help you write this piece?...I love it and she came to mind as I read it.
Bird Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 8:09 PM
Holly Molly! James this is just so darn clever my friend, your poetic wit brings a smile to my face so thank you much friend!
Mcmullin Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 7:39 PM
What a blessing, land's sake, that since i's moved from they's down south, i's doesn't talk that a-way, my friend- poet butterfly
Poe Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Clever -Alley
Loving Iii Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 12:27 PM
how would you know? john
Freeman Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 11:15 AM
Brilliant, witty, Limerick, Keep em comming, You're a hummmmmiiiinnnng! Moses!
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 6:17 AM
Interesting writing. Sara
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