Ya Shoulda Read the Fine Print, Bubba

I see that Bubba’s so forlorn.
He’s too depressed to talk today. 
Two months in a full-body cast	
can keep one’s cheerfulness at bay. 

He donned his super hero suit 
and took a header off the roof
(two-story!) Nothing broke his fall.
He lies now, silent and aloof.

He’d failed to read the tiny print:
“This suit can’t really make you fly.”
If he weren’t forty-five years old,
I’d feel compassion—even cry.


Date Written: January 29, 2018

Contest Title: Shoulda Read the Fine Print-2

Sponsor: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 16, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Ooops! Hahaha, nice one! And congrats too Janice :) , warm regards, Laura.
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March 16, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Thank you so much, Laura! Janice
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March 1, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Back with congrats, Janice. Well done.
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March 1, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
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February 28, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Nicely done, Janice, :) congratulations on your win.
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February 28, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Janice
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February 1, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much for the laughter! I really enjoyed reading this poem. All the best ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much, CayCay. I'm glad to know you got a kick out of it! Janice
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January 30, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Reminds me of Chip Gaines on HGTV'S Fixer Upper. He does things that are ill advised also for someone his age. Let's hope they start to learn for everyone's sake. :) Enjoyed.
Canerdy Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Yes, let's hope! Thanks, Robert! Janice
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January 30, 2018 at 2:55 PM
awhh, our superman was duped... a charming piece, janice!.. huggs
Canerdy Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Thanks so much, Nette! Janice
One Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Great poem Janice, not seen you around, hope you are well...
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January 30, 2018 at 9:22 AM
I'm so glad you liked it, Silent One. I am well. Good to hear from you! Janice
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January 30, 2018 at 5:47 AM
A fun read..good story..best for a win, Janice.
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January 30, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
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January 30, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Good one, Janice. Well done - GL
Canerdy Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
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