Xo's To the World

Seedlings seeking light First leaves exposed shaped like hearts Breaking through soil Water becomes warm Fish travel to find their mate Waves kissing the shore Birds in line flying Are travelling through the clouds Finding their true love
P.S. Love Greg Stanley PD's “My First Valentine” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 4:51 PM
I love how you romanticized aspects of earth. Congrats on your great poem's win.
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 1:25 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Greg. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 3:09 PM
CONGRATS GREG ON A FANTASTIC FIRST PLACE WIN ...
Haick Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 1:08 PM
A beautiful picture of nature, Gregg...especially...'the waves kissing the shore'..great imagery. Congratulations on your well deserving First Pace win! Love, Annalise
Song Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 4:26 AM
Greg..awesome imagery in your triple haiku winner! Congrats. Gwendolen
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January 13, 2012 at 1:45 AM
Very nice Greg, Congratulations on your win x
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January 12, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Greg... Congratulation, on your first place in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.
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January 12, 2012 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations Greg. I wish I had read this one earlier.
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