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Seedlings seeking light First leaves exposed shaped like hearts Breaking through soil Water becomes warm Fish travel to find their mate Waves kissing the shore Birds in line flying Are travelling through the clouds Finding their true love
P.S. Love Greg Stanley PD's “My First Valentine” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/16/2012 4:51:00 PM
I love how you romanticized aspects of earth. Congrats on your great poem's win.
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:25:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Greg. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2012 3:09:00 PM
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:08:00 PM
A beautiful picture of nature, Gregg...especially...'the waves kissing the shore'..great imagery. Congratulations on your well deserving First Pace win! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2012 4:26:00 AM
Greg..awesome imagery in your triple haiku winner! Congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:45:00 AM
Very nice Greg, Congratulations on your win x
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:24:00 PM
Greg... Congratulation, on your first place in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations Greg. I wish I had read this one earlier.
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