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Christmas, New Year, Santa Claus, snowman (horizontal)

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*Image of Santa Claus, Snowman, Holidays. Xmas Pals As seasonal passage conjures two friends, Winter paint faces full of joy and cheers, St. Nick and Frosty, all children then befriends, Both are treasures to precious little dears. Winter paint faces full of joy and cheers, Gaze the sky for Santa's sleigh o'er the glens, Both are treasures to precious little dears, Made Frosty the snowman with odds and ends. Gaze the sky for Santa's sleigh o'er the glens, Jolly St. Nick's reindeers were used as gears, Made Frosty the snowman with odds and ends, Frosty was packed with snow as Christmas nears. Jolly St. Nick's reindeers were used as gears, St. Nick and Frosty, all children then befriends, Frosty was packed with snow as Christmas nears, As seasonal passage conjures two friends. 2020 January 18 *1st Place* Christmas Pantoum Rhyme ~~Eve Roper: Judged 2020 January 25 *Picture #2 *2nd Place* ''X'' Contest, New or Old ~~Constance La France: Judged 2021 November 28

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Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2021 2:40:00 PM

William, wonderful poem and congratulations on your Second Place Win in my "X" (Xmas) New/Old Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/29/2021 3:16:00 PM

Thanks, Constance, 'twas fun, tho' an oldie ... I just loved its charm. Again, my appreciation for the placement my friend, Aloha!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2020 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Santa and Frosty what a team. A wonderful picture to go with your write.........

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/26/2020 2:06:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Paula, have a great day, Aloha!~@wk

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/26/2020 8:40:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS WILLIAM TO WIN TOP. BLESSING

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/26/2020 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Anisha!~@wk

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2020 12:43:00 AM

Wow First Place! Congratulations William! xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/26/2020 12:53:00 AM

Mahalo Connie!!! Aloha~@wk

Eve Roper

Date: 1/25/2020 7:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, William. I want to thank you for entering my contest. Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme , and imagery. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/25/2020 8:35:00 PM

I am so surprised, with extended courtesies Eve, Thank you and Aloha, wishing you all the best of 2020!~@wk

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/18/2020 11:03:00 PM

I am happy to see Christmas extended in this wonderful Pantoum William. I hope it does great in the contest! Aloha xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/18/2020 11:19:00 PM

Thank you, Connie, much aloha indeed~Mahalo!~@wk