Wynken and Blynken Boutique

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Chasing stray dreams down the street I poked my head behind a sheet It hung there splashing shadows on The polished cobbles at my feet I'd learned ago, it was a sign To indicate the goodies, fine That lay behind its hidden edge A market, grand and clandestine There was no arrow to indicate No neon flash or spinning gate Just that blank white tapestry Known only to the fortunate You see, I'd been there thrice before For treasure, and was back for more The irony was, it always changed In ways that one could not ignore So, then ... Thru the sheet to market stream To shops with golden goods, agleam But then my wife's voice from behind ... "Sweetheart - you're having another dream!" ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "A Hidden Market" Poetry Contest, Julia Ward, Sponsor.

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David Smith

Date: 7/26/2018 1:26:00 AM

Good to read something fresh and pristine with a hint of something behind the facade. Very clever and original. Like your style. Will pop in for a peek behind the curtain again soon. best regards David in NZ

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/26/2018 1:46:00 AM

Thank you so much, David, I greatly appreciate the kind comments! This is an unusual one to find, and was a fun write. Blessings to you - please visit again - I will hang a sheet! :-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/15/2018 5:27:00 PM

A great poem, Greg! Love the ending. Congratulations on your podium win! Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/15/2018 6:15:00 PM

So pleased you enjoyed this fun little romp, Sandra - many thanks and blessings to you, my friend! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/14/2018 11:30:00 PM

Hah! So cleverly penned and denouemented, if you'll permit me that asininity just this once...Gregory, your romp had everything going for it, and now with the conclusion of the contest, the Wynken and Blynken Boutique has just gotten the Nod!! Way to go G.R.B!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/15/2018 6:15:00 PM

Your kind comments are stories and poems of their own, my friend, and I look forward to them like sunshine! Thank you so much, My Poet Brother, I so appreciate your kindness and wit! :-)