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WRONG WAY

We will all die ~
despite screaming
brains try for thought.

Wrong lane, wrong way.
Death delay, pray.
Cars stray and honk.

Oh, please, cars – clear ~
a turn appears,
I steer; all cheer.

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Sara Kendrick

March 16, 2016 at 6:37 AM

Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2016 at 5:45 PM

CayCay, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2016 at 7:02 PM

Hey, I never congratulated you yet. WELL DONE.

Sandra Haight

March 11, 2016 at 1:10 PM

Very clever and well done, CayCay! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Anindya Mohan Tagore

March 11, 2016 at 12:33 PM

Lovely take... Hugs, Bobby

Beautiful Scars

March 11, 2016 at 11:55 AM

CayCay, congrats on your placement in the contest!!! Well deserved :)-luloo *Smiles*

James Inman

March 11, 2016 at 11:11 AM

Scary subject CayCay. Very nicely written. I had a very difficult time with this one.

Vladislav Raven

March 11, 2016 at 7:37 AM

Hi Cay Cay, you have done really well on a difficult form. Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2016 at 3:34 PM

well done, my friend. These are so difficult to make a story from. I was thinking they were six syllables each and now i have to redo my whole set. (sorry I can't see more. I am super behind at Soup)

Andrea Dietrich

February 14, 2016 at 7:26 PM

You did great with this very difficult form, Cay Cay. HEY, where have you been. I am waiting for an email from you. happy Valentine day my dear friend.

Janice Canerdy

February 14, 2016 at 2:56 PM

Well done, CayCay. Janice

Emile Pinet

February 14, 2016 at 11:13 AM

A touching and eloquent description of human folly. Emile

Nette Onclaud

February 14, 2016 at 9:52 AM

you got my attention all throughout this stunning write, caycay... we do fumble but try to find the way.. how are you?.. missed your presence here!... have a lovely hearts day!..huggs

CayCay Godwin

February 14, 2016 at 10:27 AM

Hey, there. Yepper, we fumble - this one is true, turned into three lanes of traffic coming at me and knew if it was meant to be, it was good bye for my Mother and me. Now, if it is the right time of night, we get serious giggles about the folly. Thank you, Nette ... CayCay

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 9:38 AM

Hi CayCay! Once somebody said that we spend a lifetime of regret to atone for a moment of folly! Musing aside...I love your take on your human folly. In the meantime I wish you a happy Valentine's Day:) ~ Warm regards // paul

CayCay Godwin

February 14, 2016 at 10:24 AM

What a terribly limiting perspective that prescribes and manifests long lasting regret! Anything from the past that one places in a big sack to carry around, is a waste to me and something I wish I could get my Mother to see. The older she gets, the more bitterness she totes around - some of it made up. Sorry, she and her attitutude weigh heavy on my mind currently. I want her to let go and Let God, and then smile all the way from her heart ...

Poet Destroyer A

February 13, 2016 at 9:01 PM

thank you for supporting my comment. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

February 13, 2016 at 7:18 PM

I still Believe in Romo. CayCay, I am glad you noticed the logo on my hat... Thanks for the reply. LINDA

CayCay Godwin

February 13, 2016 at 8:39 PM

"Eye of the Tiger" Yo, Romo

Eileen Manassian

February 13, 2016 at 6:55 PM

Hey gorgeous! Where you been? Missed you around. Hope all is well. Very well written...whatever that form is. ;) Good luck....Loved how you set it up...That inevitable beginning...to the everyday happenings.

CayCay Godwin

February 13, 2016 at 7:09 PM

Hey, gorgeous, too! I've been elsewhere, life sent me there, but all is well and I've missed you, soup, et. al. Never heard or read about this form and did find it a challenge, but that's fun, right? Thank you so much for commenting. Be well ... CayCay

Jan Allison

February 13, 2016 at 6:09 PM

clever one CayCay I am struggling to even start one of these it seems quite a challenge!:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin

February 13, 2016 at 7:07 PM

I blew off my first 4 forced attempts. Later, I napped and it came to me. Marinate on it and you'll compose, I just know it! I am thrilled that you liked my write. Thank you, Jan ... CayCay

Poet Destroyer A

February 13, 2016 at 5:57 PM

Well done, CayCay ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~

CayCay Godwin

February 13, 2016 at 7:13 PM

Happy heart day to you! I already received and ate huge amounts of chocolate - my favorite food group! Grab love and hold tight. I thank you for commenting, sweet one ... CayCay Oh, your hat says, "Dallas" and appears to be Cowboy colors - maybe next year??? I use to live near their original stadium and use to believe in Romo - now I am deliberating ...

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