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Wrong Love

There once was a Girl. So in Love,with the Moon She prayed every night,that she'd be there Soon.. The light was her Love,all in a sense Made her smile,ohh so bright. Yet her love,lacked insight You cant Love the Moon! Screamed society to her, This love affair can never be, So one sided,dont you see?. She didnt listen,so in Love Stare out the window Hours at a time The moon was her light and she was its lime.. She withered away Too a place of her own.. Off to the Moon with this love that's so wrong.

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Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/8/2011 1:29:00 PM

lime is right LOL very sour..I can see that..good line..

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/8/2011 1:28:00 PM

i would say may God bless that person you wrote about to get better but I am thinking that might not happen..no offense..maybe therapy to help with letting go of obsessive tactics that are border line mental

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/8/2011 1:26:00 PM

it is sad to see people continue laying guilt trips on the other when something is over and they did not love the person..I can imagine constant daily calls, hang ups on the phone, tweeting and all sorts of things like this when the man wants nothing more to do with them

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/8/2011 1:24:00 PM

well sometimes one needs to move on and get over something, obsession is not healthy, not at all..and when one never felt love to begin with with the other, it is obsession, and can become stalking, pushing and even to the point of revenge tactics..sad obsessive case..move on...and let go..