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Wrong

I sit upon, my thoughts so blunt: I hear the birds that cry, Not what I do, but what I can't, One can only try. I look upon, the sky so dark, The air is cool and still. The journeys that I won't embark, Feelings I'll never feel. I'll walk this road, with uncertainty: I'll help myself along, Until I rest-- eternally, Forgetting all my wrong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/23/2013 6:05:00 PM
Elliot, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda
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Date: 3/18/2013 11:53:00 AM
Nice write. Very deep and very passionate. Great Work.
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Date: 3/16/2013 1:46:00 AM
LOVED this poem Elliot....I relate completely unfortunately but then I think that's why I loved it so much...I could feel every word.
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Date: 3/7/2013 1:41:00 PM
I like this...wrong not to try to live a little or a lot!
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