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Written On Wall After Labor Day-W

Summer isn’t a time
Moving creature south for winter
It’s a place as well.

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Sixth place winner
Contest: "Summer is over"In Honor by S K A T

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Skat A

May 23, 2015 at 11:04 AM

THANKS

Wilma Neels

September 10, 2010 at 4:09 AM

Dr. Ram congratulations on your win in Irma's contest, enjoy your day :) Wilma

James Fraser

September 2, 2010 at 12:10 PM

Many congratulatons Dr.Ram on your win in the contest >> James

Francine Roberts

September 2, 2010 at 8:26 AM

nice one Dr. Ram, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2010 at 4:14 AM

Congratulations on your win Dr.Ram in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2010 at 9:39 PM

Very interesting one, Dr. Ram. Congratulations!

Joyce Johnson

September 1, 2010 at 7:36 PM

Congratulations Dr. Mehta. Joyce

Skat A

September 1, 2010 at 5:44 PM

Dr.Ram* nice&enjoy!** Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2010 at 5:06 PM

Super congrats Dr. Ram on your big win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy your big win..with luv..

August 29, 2010 at 1:57 PM

Interesting perspective carried in these three lines. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

August 14, 2010 at 12:16 AM

Very nice. I was born Labor Day, Dr. Ram. ON a Monday, when it falls. So this time of year is both sad and happy for me. Sad to turn a year older and see life fading into fall and winter (I hate the end of summer) but happy at least it is my Bday! LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

August 13, 2010 at 6:18 PM

Oh yes, Dr. Ram, they're heading for Florida soon. You wouldn't believe the migration of birds (and tourists) we have during the winter months. Very clever! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

August 13, 2010 at 10:45 AM

Yep! When you see the geese in V formation, then summer is over. Like your style, doc. Dave

Wilma Neels

August 13, 2010 at 4:44 AM

Great Haiku for the contest Dr Ram, enjoy your day as well ~ Wilma

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

August 12, 2010 at 10:35 PM

Dear Dr.Ram, Bravo, a superb Haiku and worthy of a win in the Contest Good Luck I LOVE Haiku if YOU like them to You should read Raul Moreno's POEMS He also does Great Tributes to SOUPERS Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments They are Appreciated YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG - SOUP Mail Call