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Written Life

Gazing at the stars at night Imagining what it would be like If I only had the power to write my future Just how words in a poem are written as a story Never facing the hatred and aggression of the world Never shedding a tear in my eyes Surely to never face disappointment Or lies in life Is this idea such a glory Or destruction in lies For it has given all the positive and never challenged us in a fight For we never will suffer like they are now Living life in glory Having and infinite possibility with no bleeding tears and cries Would this feeling be so natural Presuming our death and rebirth Or is it a fantasy giving us much worse So would you rather live a story Or have everything pass With unexpected chapters And never ending gasps So ask yourself this question Having your will in mystery And living your life at hands Without a recant

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/7/2016 2:21:00 AM
Carolina Dasilva, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:55:00 PM
Carolina Dasilva, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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Date: 8/1/2008 3:26:00 AM
Wow what a thought provoking poem. Outstanding writing Carolina. If you delete your poem from PoetrySoup you can not get it back from here. I hope you printed it out or saved it on your computer. If you saved it then all you have to do is just add it back . Love, Carol
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