Written in the Stars

Written: May 4th, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Robert James Liguori ********************* Some nights, the sky feels janiform— half vernal promise, half neolithic memory— a cimmerian of choices I almost made. I look up, letting the nimbus-laced cloudscape vellicate the mind with its noisome, necessary truths, each thought an infinitesimal antiphon echoing through the tensile hush. The stars seem luculent, almost officious, as if they’ve taken it upon themselves to festoon the dark with quiet directives— a sobriquet for every fear, a rhapsody for every wound. Their light is never soporific; It carries the spiritus mundi of wandering souls, the symbiosis of what we were and what we dare to become. And sometimes— in a moment so evanescent it feels imagined— a single star breaks rank, offering an epiphany with the gentleness of woodbine and the courage of an intrepid sherpa guiding me up the steep declivity of doubt. It whispers, without words, that destiny is neither fixed nor fickle— That's what’s “written in the stars.” is simply the amaranthine reminder that even in our most somber, threadbare, dysania-ridden hours, We are still luminous enough to write back.
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George Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 5:00 AM
What wonderful diction with the use of choicest words and rare vocabulary! The closing stanza is a real jewel. You are able to read the positive message written in the stars....."that even in our most somber, threadbare, dysania-ridden hours, We are still luminous enough" . A gem of a poem shedding luminance like the innumerable stars that 'festoon' the sky.
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 5:14 PM
A creative work that you have penned in this one. I see it is written for a contest, and it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Sheehan Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:49 PM
Wonderful piece. It captures the essence. Great tribute to stars and the night sky. Nice rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing.
Kauffman Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 12:25 PM
Dear Lasaad, you have so eloquently written of the majesty of the stars above us yet we are still able to communicate with their luminosity. There are a multitude of emotions in your lines as we read the message "written" in the stars. Best wishes for the contest, my friend. Blessings.
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