Written Around Age 30

(Written around age 30...that young poet has been gone forover 40 years. )

I will share, share fully
in man's common oblivion
and seek peace in my heart 
o'er peace on earth.
I will carefully and very 
deliberately taste
all the food I eat, 
bathe often, and 
whistle off-key as I please.

I will value every moment 
of friendship like sparkling 
diamonds on a necklace, 
and I'll let my friend's pain 
beat on me like my own.

I will try to love women 
better, much better--
feel their pain more 
but fear them less
as their thighs and breasts 
and bottoms run wildly 
through my mind like
unruly children in 
an orphanage of desire.

And I will breathe better,
filling my lungs to near burst
with the spirit of life... and 
finally, I will try learn to have 
more patience with 
incorrigible death.
that unseen god 
whose kiss touches all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/19/2020 10:10:00 AM
Hi LJ, Congratulations on your winning placement! Through your imagery - "unruly children in an orphanage of desire" - your life goals are wonderfully stated. Very nice!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/19/2020 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Sam-- of course a couple years after I wrote this I got married--so there ain't been no fun for 40 years!
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