Written

Somewhere is written
the day life will finish with me.
Maybe it will be where wind whistles
through cracked canyon walls.
Or where an angry sea speaks
in suffocating squalls.
It may be on a tag attached to a key
that will unlock the end of me.
The expiration date on a can of peas
might that put my mind at ease?
I ponder the answer, devoid of a clue.
The truth will come only the day I'm through.
It will be definitive, clear, and true.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/8/2021 8:01:00 PM
Yes, the day will come. My mom passed away in April...indeed. Phew. This is a lovely poem to read with its pondering of the end.
Login to Reply
Schneiter Avatar
Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/13/2021 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. The poem is not exactly a day-brightener, but it's helpful, I think, to confront life's harsh realities. Sorry about your mom. Hugs, Paul
Date: 5/27/2021 7:39:00 PM
Wonderful! God bless you! Love, Gina
Login to Reply
Schneiter Avatar
Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/13/2021 12:45:00 PM
Gina, it's kind of you to comment with such a warm and supportive message. Please know of my gratitude. Hugs, Paul
Date: 4/17/2021 10:22:00 PM
Hello Paul ... Thank God we don't know when our expiry day is so we can go on living. I did enjoy your poem Paul and hope I don't it coming - thanks Paul - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Schneiter Avatar
Paul Schneiter
Date: 4/18/2021 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay. Yes, it's a blessing that we don't know when we will take the big off-ramp. The key (obviously) is to cherish every day and live it to the fullest. Hugs, always, Paul
Date: 4/14/2021 11:09:00 AM
Lets hope it will be many years in the future so that I can continue to enjoy your words of wisdom but also your wit:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Schneiter Avatar
Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/16/2021 10:56:00 PM
Jan, just want you to know I'm sorry about the unwarranted attacks on you. No one has been more generous in sharing marvelous talent across a wide range of poetic genres, some of which are spiritual and divinity-affirming. Hugs, love, Paul
Schneiter Avatar
Paul Schneiter
Date: 4/14/2021 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. You give my ego wings; I could not be more grateful. I hope all is well with you and your cherished ones. I've been AWOL for awhile ... need to catch up on your ever-incredible poetry. Hugs xxx Paul
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad