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Writing With Weeping Words

I see you sink deep in my tear when my heart melts and flows in flood. You drift from me to a land far at the end of my promised world. As my dreams break, drown in despair I see you sink deep in my tear. My crumbling sorrow I can’t share, the fall of pained clouds I can hear. You have been so near yet so far, your shadow lies on my moist eyes. I see you sink deep in my tear where my love’s disowned debris lies. You let sunrise colors pass by, loss of my day I couldn’t bear. When night descends with weeping sky I see you sink deep in my tear. October 6, 2017. It's The End of the Forms Series Sponsored by : Broken Wings.

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Date: 10/10/2017 12:21:00 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Subimal ... blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/9/2017 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/9/2017 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
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Date: 10/9/2017 2:41:00 PM
A sad, weeping poem, Subimal, written beautifully in the Quartern Form. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 10/9/2017 1:58:00 PM
Subimal, very emotional and you sure did write with weep words, congratulations on your win in my contest !
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Date: 10/6/2017 10:15:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with yout beautiful poem :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:52:00 AM
Thank you, Darren
Date: 10/6/2017 8:36:00 AM
Very well written Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2017 12:52:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.

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