Writing With Weeping Words

I see you sink deep in my tear
when my heart melts and flows in flood.
You drift from me to a land far
at the end of my promised world.

As my dreams break, drown in despair
I see you sink deep in my tear.
My crumbling sorrow I can’t share,
the fall of pained clouds I can hear.

You have been so near yet so far,
your shadow lies on my moist eyes.
I see you sink deep in my tear
where my love’s disowned debris lies.

You let sunrise colors pass by,
loss of my day I couldn’t bear.
When night descends with weeping sky
I see you sink deep in my tear.

October 6, 2017.
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Barden Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 12:21 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Subimal ... blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal Hugs Eve ~`*
Sands Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:41 PM
A sad, weeping poem, Subimal, written beautifully in the Quartern Form. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
La France Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:58 PM
Subimal, very emotional and you sure did write with weep words, congratulations on your win in my contest !
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:28 PM
I think Constance is really going to like this one. It's very emotive and with great imagery, Subimal. Don't you just love this quatern form? I have been using it a lot myself lately!!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Many thanks, Andrea. I like Quatran because it has got some kind of music ingrained in it.
White Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Good luck in the contest with yout beautiful poem :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Thank you, Darren
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Very well written Subimal :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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