Writing the Poem

Writing the Poem
by Ayesha Karim




I am alive.

I am breathing.

I thank God that I have the sweetest Life.

Blackberries surround me.

I talk on my new Blackberry mobile phone.

I call. I text friends and family.

I seek clarity.

I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:48 AM
A great write and a wonderful 7! I am in love with your lines Ayesha
Karim Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:58 AM
Thanks Funom, your a nice guy! Thanks for the compliment.
Boddie Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 8:10 PM
usually I burn one or two....maybe sip on a brew....then turn on some good music....because the inspiration cant refuse it....;)
Karim Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 5:13 PM
I am just talking about what I do. I am a wine drinker. That's the only "alcohol" I touch and I quit smoking over a year ago...
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 3:49 PM
:) Welcome
Karim Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Thanks.
Neels Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Love your approach with this write of yours Ayesha. Thank you for your comment on my poem "Get into your emotions"
Karim Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Thank you.
A   Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 11:10 PM
Ayesha, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
Karim Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 2:18 AM
Thank you Linda.
Gregory Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 7:27 PM
somber the mood when ur eyes open...its good u never forget though... good write
Karim Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 2:56 AM
Thanks Wes.
Carrillo Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 11:06 PM
This is good. A poem about life. God is great. He gave us life to enjoy it. Take care and God be with you always..... Lucilla
Karim Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 10:35 PM
Thank you Lucilla.
Rogers Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 11:28 AM
AK, I agree with Litan Dey, your last line, "I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight.", is simply "PROFOUND"! Good work!//Sinclair
Karim Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Thanks Robert.
Dey Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 10:30 AM
I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight...i like the line most.Good work
Karim Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Thanks Litan this line relates to how things have changed in my life since turning 30. I'm 32 now. I'm much more "myself" or self-aware than I was 5, 10, even 15 years ago. That line of my poem sums that all up. I have come a long way and I have my whole life ahead of me.
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