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Writing the Poem

Writing the Poem
by Ayesha Karim




I am alive.

I am breathing.

I thank God that I have the sweetest Life.

Blackberries surround me.

I talk on my new Blackberry mobile phone.

I call. I text friends and family.

I seek clarity.

I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight.

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/1/2016 7:48:00 AM

A great write and a wonderful 7! I am in love with your lines Ayesha

Ayesha Karim
Date: 2/1/2016 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Funom, your a nice guy! Thanks for the compliment.

Eric Boddie

Date: 9/11/2015 8:10:00 PM

usually I burn one or two....maybe sip on a brew....then turn on some good music....because the inspiration cant refuse it....;)

Ayesha Karim
Date: 9/12/2015 5:13:00 PM

I am just talking about what I do. I am a wine drinker. That's the only "alcohol" I touch and I quit smoking over a year ago...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 3:49:00 PM

:) Welcome

Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/26/2015 4:09:00 PM

Thanks.

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/25/2015 8:00:00 AM

Love your approach with this write of yours Ayesha. Thank you for your comment on my poem "Get into your emotions"

Ayesha Karim
Date: 3/25/2015 9:09:00 AM

Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2014 11:10:00 PM

Ayesha, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~

Ayesha Karim
Date: 12/26/2014 2:18:00 AM

Thank you Linda.

Weston Gregory

Date: 6/21/2014 7:27:00 PM

somber the mood when ur eyes open...its good u never forget though... good write

Ayesha Karim
Date: 6/23/2014 2:56:00 AM

Thanks Wes.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/2/2014 11:06:00 PM

This is good. A poem about life. God is great. He gave us life to enjoy it. Take care and God be with you always..... Lucilla

Ayesha Karim
Date: 6/3/2014 10:35:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla.

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/14/2014 11:28:00 AM

AK, I agree with Litan Dey, your last line, "I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight.", is simply "PROFOUND"! Good work!//Sinclair

Ayesha Karim
Date: 3/30/2014 8:43:00 PM

Thanks Robert.

Litan Dey

Date: 8/25/2013 10:30:00 AM

I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight...i like the line most.Good work

Ayesha Karim
Date: 8/25/2013 11:55:00 AM

Thanks Litan this line relates to how things have changed in my life since turning 30. I'm 32 now. I'm much more "myself" or self-aware than I was 5, 10, even 15 years ago. That line of my poem sums that all up. I have come a long way and I have my whole life ahead of me.

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