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Glasses laid aside..Thoughts occupy my mind..

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                                              Than-Bauk hard work
                                               Thoughts berserk go
                                                  A perk for brain

In honor of :^Rick Parise
Contest: Than-Bauk

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Joe Maverick Date: 11/8/2011 1:45:00 PM wishing you well in the contest Sara... with this perky piece.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/8/2011 1:09:00 PM Hey, this is terrific, Sara! I'm sure Rick will appreciate the humor as well. Best wishes for success in his contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/8/2011 12:08:00 PM LOL, yes, it's a deceptively tricky form Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/8/2011 6:20:00 AM Yes.This is now very nice Sara.I like the picture too.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/8/2011 2:36:00 AM Very nice Sara.pl.check the syllable count of 3rd line.Which should be 4 for all the 3 lines. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 11/7/2011 8:53:00 PM Sara--saweeeeeeet lines here and a very difficult thing for my small mind to wrap itself around....gotta work hard on this form...Gwendolen Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 11/7/2011 7:38:00 PM sorry forgot who I was reading mom!! Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 11/7/2011 7:37:00 PM funny write....hope you are doing well...have you been bungee jumping yet? I would like to see that!! Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 11/7/2011 5:16:00 PM I actually love the Than Bauk style. It's quite challenging but fun wonce you get used to it. nice job Sara Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 11/7/2011 2:35:00 PM Thanks for the" Than-Bauk" lesson! I had to Google that one! The poem is cool as a fan on an iceberg at the bottom of Antarctica! And that is COOOOOOL! Login to Reply