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Writing Than-Bauk

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Glasses laid aside..Thoughts occupy my mind..

. Than-Bauk hard work Thoughts berserk go A perk for brain In honor of :^Rick Parise Contest: Than-Bauk

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Joe Maverick

Date: 11/8/2011 1:45:00 PM

wishing you well in the contest Sara... with this perky piece..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2011 1:09:00 PM

Hey, this is terrific, Sara! I'm sure Rick will appreciate the humor as well. Best wishes for success in his contest. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 11/8/2011 12:08:00 PM

LOL, yes, it's a deceptively tricky form

Kash Poet

Date: 11/8/2011 6:20:00 AM

Yes.This is now very nice Sara.I like the picture too.Best wishes.

Kash Poet

Date: 11/8/2011 2:36:00 AM

Very nice Sara.pl.check the syllable count of 3rd line.Which should be 4 for all the 3 lines.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/7/2011 8:53:00 PM

Sara--saweeeeeeet lines here and a very difficult thing for my small mind to wrap itself around....gotta work hard on this form...Gwendolen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/7/2011 7:38:00 PM

sorry forgot who I was reading mom!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/7/2011 7:37:00 PM

funny write....hope you are doing well...have you been bungee jumping yet? I would like to see that!!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/7/2011 5:16:00 PM

I actually love the Than Bauk style. It's quite challenging but fun wonce you get used to it. nice job Sara

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/7/2011 2:35:00 PM

Thanks for the" Than-Bauk" lesson! I had to Google that one! The poem is cool as a fan on an iceberg at the bottom of Antarctica! And that is COOOOOOL!