Writing Portraits

With pen in hand,
while others quantity scribble
the poet choice-fully writes….

(The latter requires more
thought, and perhaps less
feature – a truer poetic portrait 
minimal angel a bit creature -- )
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Empress Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 2:49 AM
Sometimes I cant stop when I start writing. Short is beautiful, and evocative and packs so much ~ your words are meaningful dear Jo, pleasure reading you. Sending you light always 🌙 💫
DiMino Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 4:11 AM
It's all about packing...you pack a lot of truly great poetic language into your works. It's all good! I'm no expert.
Maverick Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Good poem Joe Dimino, enjoyed reading.'
DiMino Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Joe; great hearing from you. Write away!
Wolf Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 8:21 PM
'choice-fully' is going write into my dictionary. Two thumbs up.
DiMino Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 8:54 PM
I know, always making up words. Can't help myself. Thank you, Gershon. It must drive an educator like yourself bonkers.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Yes. So true, my friend. I do have some long poems but I love forms because they limit us. I just like writing with limitation but I think many prefer total freedom . A great poem
DiMino Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, Andrea; I love sonnets. My "so called" Free Verse, mix all forms of poetry. I often throw everything at the wall (in one poem)...in an attempt to get something that I like, will affix my name to. It's all good. Not about size...but quality. Poetry need not be defined...only that after a work is read, the reader says: "Now that's poetry!".
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 7:54 AM
I like brevity, but longer poetic feats are important too. Hugs
DiMino Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 8:40 AM
Of course...each writer to his or her own. Thank you, Kim. The writer must determine the value. As for my own preference, no secret by now, I find only necessary makeup appealing. It is a delicate balance. There are folks here who write wonderful long poems, and yet use economy of language. Concise well-trimmed poetic language. Less about the length of a poem, and more about fine tuning. Eliminating fatty words that do not enhance the taste of a work. Just my humble opinion -- I am no poetry teacher.
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 6:44 AM
- No doodles... let your mind fly, Joseph :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 8:51 AM
Doodles and poodles, interesting and playful:))
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