Writing Poetic Motif

With pen in hand I sat, clearly I could visualize
the graphic scene I intended my readers to see.
Each detail was so vivid when I closed my eyes;
a child, happily singing beneath a dogwood tree.

Trying to write the words, my breath was shallow.
How could I describe the curled edges of a leaf.
or the color of soil in the field beyond, left fallow?
How was I to aptly convey Spring in poetic motif?

My pulse quickened as I filled my pen with ink
Images were copied from my mind to stationery.
Gray skies came alive; leaves were fringed in pink
Verses flowed freely; I dared not dawdle or tarry.

There was nothing ambiguous in what I had penned
Expressed realistically, the child's voice could be heard.
Through imagery, a poet has the ability to transcend
readers into each verse when the imagination is spurred.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/17/2020 5:42:00 AM
I tip my hat fair lady, great ink my friend!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/18/2020 3:58:00 PM
Thanks ever so kindly, Mark.
Date: 12/15/2020 3:40:00 PM
This is wonderful and wondrous, Jenna. Such a creative way of depicting 'Spring in poetic motif.' Superb penning, Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/17/2020 4:09:00 AM
I appreciate your encouraging kudos, Gershon. Thank you very much.
Date: 12/15/2020 2:24:00 AM
Jenna your motif clearly describes the scene, the pen in your hand’s a miraculous instrument... Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/17/2020 4:08:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Belle.
Date: 12/13/2020 5:38:00 PM
So true Jenna and you have penned this beautifully :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/15/2020 12:21:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi. I hope you're well.
Date: 12/13/2020 4:12:00 PM
I rely on my child's eyes and voice often and always. Well executed my friend!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/15/2020 12:21:00 AM
Some things are appreciated more is seen througha child's eyes. Thanks so much, Caren.
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