Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Kimo

Writing

emerald waves of memories from past 
                            crashing ~ luscious ~ turbulent 
                                 bare my soul in writing




                                          March 26, 2022
                               Form K - KIMO Poetry Contest
                               Sponsor: Constance La France
                       Syllables (10 -7- 6) checked by HMS.com
                                        SECOND PLACE

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Line Gauthier April 2, 2022 at 7:48 PM Beautiful, Malabika ~

Constance La France April 1, 2022 at 12:14 PM Mala, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2022 at 3:16 PM Glad to see you on the winners' list. Back with my big congrats, mala.

Sam Kauffman March 30, 2022 at 12:23 PM Dear Mala, this is so poignant with a wonderful vibrant image of crashing waves of memories! Love your use of words that leave your soul bare but not barren! Congratulations on your win! Blessings and hugs dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith March 30, 2022 at 9:45 AM Congratulations on this win. A beautiful Kimo write. So True. Today, be blessed with your win....................

Mitali Saikia March 30, 2022 at 9:44 AM Beautiful Mala di !! Love the way you weave the words

Bill Baker March 29, 2022 at 4:46 PM Excellent Kimo, Mala. Congratulations on the high finish in the contest. I'm adding you to my poets I follow list. I just started writing in the Kimo form, but I think I'll write some more. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Christuraj Alex March 28, 2022 at 7:08 PM "waves of memories" - Beautiful definition. Congratulations!

Jan Allison March 28, 2022 at 1:13 PM I certainly can relate, many congrats in your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2022 at 9:16 AM I really like how you bared your soul here!! I think writing is the popular topic for this contest!! Malabika Ray Choudhury March 27, 2022 at 10:14 AM Thanks, Andrea. Will look forward to reading yours. I keep editing - never feels like done!

Gershon Wolf March 26, 2022 at 9:14 PM Reliving, reviewing, writing down your cherished memories -- the best kind of 'baring' I can think of!! Nicely penned, Mala. Cheers, Gershon Malabika Ray Choudhury March 27, 2022 at 10:15 AM Thank you, Gershon. You are a great writer - you understand very well where writing comes from!

Paulette Calasibetta March 26, 2022 at 12:03 PM Mala, this is stunning~as writers we can all relate to the brevity you have penned about "Writing". Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette Malabika Ray Choudhury March 27, 2022 at 10:17 AM Thank you, Paulette. Yes, we can all relate to why and where our writing comes from!