Writer's Despair

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I say it doesn’t matter to me… If they listen to the words I write, Find comfort in the thoughts, Remember that there is more to me… Than just a stanza or a verb I say it doesn’t matter to me… Yet when they don’t hear my heart, When they are far from my hope, And I can’t even find the words… There is hurt that quakes, a heart That breaks I say it doesn’t matter to me… If they don’t read what I’ve penned, Find inspiration in what I’ve said, Yet there is a place deep within me… Where my pages are wrinkled With the pain of knowing my words… Aren’t really heard

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/30/2022 5:23:00 AM

How sad, your word are always beautiful, but like me some are deprived of spare time, my excuse is that we have and have had a viable family business for the last 32 years and it is still in operation, so we can't neglect it, i have to divide my time and attention carefully between Proto Personnel and Poetry Soup. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/29/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas and prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/28/2022 10:07:00 PM

You have expressed a truth many of us here share, I too feel sad if my words aren't heard, but rest assured, your words are :)