Write You Out

I think it’s time I write
Write you OUT
Of the coming pages of my life
Oh…you linger
On every page
that's ever been
Keeping the plot a disguise
Unexpected events
My heart's demise
Slowly but surely
being written
By your unseen hand
I reread chapters
You were in my yesterday
You haunt my today
I don’t want you in my tomorrow
Not when you only bring me pain

No
I’m going to write you out
Cause I couldn’t write off
The debt of pain
I STILL OWE
To your oh so exacting heart...
I can't write it off
and so...
I’ll do the next best thing
I'll write you OUT

Out of the next scintillating sizzling sexy sentence
Out of the next dreamy dreamscape
Out of the next contentment compartment
Out of the next feminine fruition fantasy
For you've written only fragments
Sentence fragments of the greater picture me
Oh my!
Oh me!
I’m going to write you OUT
Of MY book 
Of rememberance
The book of ME
Oh, it could have been
The best seller of your LIFE
But now you'll never know
Cause the coming pages are clean
for some beautiful soul
Some expert author
With the plot of pleasure 
Bursting from his heart 
Onto me
I'll LET HIM
Scribble his lines
Those glorious curves and dots
all over my body and mind
all over me...
Yes....spill his passion inked words
ALL....OVER....ME!!
And him..
HIM
I'm going to write IN
Oh...so deep and gloriously...IN
The book of ME

Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/17/2014 11:47:00 AM
wow, you take that preposition IN and really do sexy things with it. The out, not so much. haha. This was a very entertaining and also sensual one, Eileen. You rock!!
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Date: 8/17/2014 11:47:00 AM
by the way, of course that community builder list is not so important. But one guy here really digs it and I had seen him commenting to you about it!!
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:50:00 AM
I think we've all had someone in our life that we have wanted to write out, at some point. Good job. I can feel the intensity and heat of anger with this poem!
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Date: 8/16/2014 11:31:00 PM
Crackin'.... A truly amazing free verse write my friend. This raw truth and emotion can only come from a talented poet IMHO. " Out of the next scintillating sizzling sexy sentence Out of the next dreamy dreamscape Out of the next contentment compartment Out of the next feminine fruition fantasy For you've written only fragments Sentence fragments of the greater picture me Oh my! Oh me!" ------------- PURE GOLD!!! Adding to my fav....
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Date: 8/14/2014 10:13:00 PM
Awesome confessional write!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:15:00 PM
:) Thank you, my dear.
Date: 8/14/2014 4:38:00 PM
This is slamming great - I enjoyed this powerful write! Pandita
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:06:00 PM
Thanks, Pandita. I was in a slamming mood, I must confess. Glad you stopped by and left me a sweet note.
Date: 8/14/2014 4:33:00 PM
they say breaking up is hard to do. these words affected me because you write about the one you love and I have nothing to write about the one I say I love. it seems that you had a lot to say about the one you were writing out. so we are for the moments quite the opposites.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:08:00 PM
Disappointed love reveals itself in these kinds of feelings. It's only natural, John. Sad but true. In Beyoncé's words..."Why don't you love, Baby why don't you love me, when I make me so damn easy to love. I got beauty, I got class, I got style and I got ...A$$...but you don't even care to care." Go figure some people out....Read your latest. Fantastic write.
Date: 8/14/2014 3:32:00 PM
Ow Eileen..I love the warrior in you...This has a powerful message.I can relate to the voice in your verses sweety .So hear me Roar : ). P.S- I am a bit busy lately but am glad that tonight I have some free time here with friends like yoy-Charma
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:09:00 PM
:) Thanks, my sweet. She fights for control now and again. I must say...I do like her too. She sure is more attractive that the sweet loving "anything for you" girl I really am. Thanks for the visit, Charma....you are always welcome here.
Date: 8/14/2014 2:26:00 PM
nice metaphorIA, just stopping by to show support!Ran into another nice one.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:09:00 PM
Thanks, JS. Support is always good, and I do appreciate it so much. Have a great evening.
Date: 8/14/2014 1:52:00 PM
I hope that you find the love ink you are looking for my beautiful friend. I love the raw liberty in this poem. J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:10:00 PM
Thanks for that adjective...beautiful. It brings me so much joy! Justin...you are amazing!
Date: 8/14/2014 11:44:00 AM
Spectacular!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:11:00 PM
You are kind...I like kindness...an endearing quality. :)
Date: 8/14/2014 11:28:00 AM
compelling, personal write, eileen...so much to learn from you... beautiful metaphors!.. huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:12:00 PM
Thanks, Nette....For the most part...I'm an open book. It's not always wise...but....my heart defies the wisdom of the world. Hugs to you, my dear.
Date: 8/14/2014 10:20:00 AM
Eileen, I can see your pen smoldering in the corner. This poem is, as we say in Boston, "WICKED PISSA".
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Date: 8/14/2014 10:02:00 AM
Oh this is incredible...got to run...I'll be back later.....hugs Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/14/2014 11:09:00 PM
Love all the play on words and how you are leaving the pages open for him....beautiful....hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 10:04:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. See you later.
Date: 8/14/2014 9:34:00 AM
Hugs back Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 9:55:00 AM
:) :) :) ;) :)
Date: 8/14/2014 9:18:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me, you are truly one of a kind. Thanks for me have a glimpse of your beautiful mind. Another favorite!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/14/2014 9:20:00 AM
OH WOW, Richard....Thank you so much! So glad you are here today. I'm in a SLAM kind of mood. Need to vent. Wish it were that simple to write some people OUT of my life! I'm a softie push over...but here....I'm A Warrior Princess! :) HUGSSSSSS
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