Write a Poem For Me

Write a poem for me from the bottom of your heart, look for the words still there waiting, waiting for your nod to bloom into flowers like the roses of your garden, give them a chance, place them one by one carelessly stitch a poem with those flowers to be. Write a poem for me, listen to the words deeply embedded in your heart, their desire to become a stream and dance down a mountain's lap to drench you,to drench me. Write a poem for me carelessly picking up those words may be with some mistakes I like as they are I will touch them and watch how they bloom into flowers, and everyday among those words my undestined walk to reach to a stream and wait under a mountain's lap to get drenched. =============000============
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Konos Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Catch as Kash can......thanks ...I found it amazing.......
Shirey Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Very nice poem!
Anderson-Throop Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Kash--romantic and full of imagery.... i especially like 'dance down a mountain lap' Nicely done!
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 6:33 PM
Such romance..always..you have one lucky wife. Congrad's Kash Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 12:01 PM
now why would you forget all the poetry forms. Don't say THAT, Kash.
Song Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Congrats on this masterpiece, Kashi...each word when chosen perfectly is just as u wrote---like a flower! Gotta save this one for sure!! Thanks for your New Yr's wishes...I will be will my daughter and some close friends..we are getting our games planned this evening...and the grocery list too!! All my best to u, gwendolen
Collins Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 8:43 AM
Dear Kash - "may be with some mistakes I like as they are" That is so full of meaning - life/poetry Your metaphor and innuendo is sparkling. love, Kathy
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December 19, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Kash, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 6:39 PM
congratulations, kash. I have not seen you on winner lists lately and was hoping to see you on one soon. Luv, Andrea
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Kash xx
Elizondo Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 11:37 AM
I enjoyed this poem. Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 10:42 AM
ok, lazy boy. It's time for you to get moving!!! on a poem!!
Palmer Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 8:48 AM
wonderful write Kash
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 12:53 AM
still awaiting a new poem!!
Horsman Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 2:46 PM
love this, so sincere, and a beautiful poem...
Situation Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 10:55 AM
I never carelessly choose words. Words are details that tell tense, intent, pretence. I climb the mountain sometimes not knowing if I'm at the top. Or have to go a different way to reach the summit. But the main thing is. The finished product is for the reader. I'm giving to them not me.
Richards Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 9:49 AM
This is wonderful dear Kash!! "my undestined walk to reach to a stream and wait under a mountain's lap to get drenched!!!!!!!!!! that is one amazing way to write!! Love it! (perhaps for Joe's contest??.....a winner here!!
Neels Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 5:32 AM
Kash, I just love this beauty. How are you doing? Sorry I have been so absent :)
Ndlovu Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:44 AM
BEAUTIFUL! Definitely a fav poem and you a fav poet :) Wow!
Williams Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:07 AM
Kash, excellent write, I love the refrain and it just flows smoothly off the paper, very well done...David
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:28 PM
Russell was right when he said Gorgeous. It is indeed a gorgeous poem. You are so good at free verse, kashinath. excellent imagery. I love it!
Sivey Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 8:59 PM
This is so very beautiful, a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and dynamic poem this evening! What a powerful poem within the wondrous lines! I just love how it flows right of the tongue when it is read aloud! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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