Write a Poem For Me

Write a poem for me from the bottom of your heart, look for the words still there waiting, waiting for your nod to bloom into flowers like the roses of your garden, give them a chance, place them one by one carelessly stitch a poem with those flowers to be. Write a poem for me, listen to the words deeply embedded in your heart, their desire to become a stream and dance down a mountain's lap to drench you,to drench me. Write a poem for me carelessly picking up those words may be with some mistakes I like as they are I will touch them and watch how they bloom into flowers, and everyday among those words my undestined walk to reach to a stream and wait under a mountain's lap to get drenched. =============000============

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/4/2013 6:26:00 PM
Catch as Kash can......thanks ...I found it amazing.......
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Date: 2/5/2013 12:09:00 PM
Very nice poem!
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Date: 1/7/2013 11:17:00 AM
Kash--romantic and full of imagery.... i especially like 'dance down a mountain lap' Nicely done!
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Date: 1/6/2013 6:33:00 PM
Such romance..always..you have one lucky wife. Congrad's Kash Light & Love
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Date: 1/3/2013 12:01:00 PM
now why would you forget all the poetry forms. Don't say THAT, Kash.
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Date: 12/30/2012 2:35:00 PM
Congrats on this masterpiece, Kashi...each word when chosen perfectly is just as u wrote---like a flower! Gotta save this one for sure!! Thanks for your New Yr's wishes...I will be will my daughter and some close friends..we are getting our games planned this evening...and the grocery list too!! All my best to u, gwendolen
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Date: 12/21/2012 8:43:00 AM
Dear Kash - "may be with some mistakes I like as they are" That is so full of meaning - life/poetry Your metaphor and innuendo is sparkling. love, Kathy
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Date: 12/19/2012 10:02:00 PM
Kash, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
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Date: 12/18/2012 6:39:00 PM
congratulations, kash. I have not seen you on winner lists lately and was hoping to see you on one soon. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/18/2012 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Kash xx
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Date: 12/16/2012 11:37:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. Thank you
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:42:00 AM
ok, lazy boy. It's time for you to get moving!!! on a poem!!
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Date: 12/16/2012 8:48:00 AM
wonderful write Kash
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Date: 12/15/2012 12:53:00 AM
still awaiting a new poem!!
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Date: 12/14/2012 2:46:00 PM
love this, so sincere, and a beautiful poem...
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Date: 12/14/2012 10:55:00 AM
I never carelessly choose words. Words are details that tell tense, intent, pretence. I climb the mountain sometimes not knowing if I'm at the top. Or have to go a different way to reach the summit. But the main thing is. The finished product is for the reader. I'm giving to them not me.
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Date: 12/11/2012 9:49:00 AM
This is wonderful dear Kash!! "my undestined walk to reach to a stream and wait under a mountain's lap to get drenched!!!!!!!!!! that is one amazing way to write!! Love it! (perhaps for Joe's contest??.....a winner here!!
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Date: 12/11/2012 5:32:00 AM
Kash, I just love this beauty. How are you doing? Sorry I have been so absent :)
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Date: 12/11/2012 3:44:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL! Definitely a fav poem and you a fav poet :) Wow!
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:07:00 AM
Kash, excellent write, I love the refrain and it just flows smoothly off the paper, very well done...David
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:28:00 PM
Russell was right when he said Gorgeous. It is indeed a gorgeous poem. You are so good at free verse, kashinath. excellent imagery. I love it!
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Date: 12/10/2012 8:59:00 PM
This is so very beautiful, a gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and dynamic poem this evening! What a powerful poem within the wondrous lines! I just love how it flows right of the tongue when it is read aloud! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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