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Wrinkles and Grey

Very impressionistic pinkish red horizon At the very beginning of the slowly settling sun Small crescent moon shining as the day is done As the gentle breeze touches my wrinkles and grey I want to thank you God for this glorious day

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William Kershaw

Date: 11/19/2009 8:05:00 PM

Sara, wrinkles and grey? Great line and an excellent write. I always pictured you as bonny and fair with a glint of auburn in your tresses. No wrinkles to be found in my Sara image. Love, Will

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/19/2009 6:01:00 PM

simply beautiful, Sara

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/19/2009 5:40:00 PM

well written.Yes GOD thank you for this day.

James Fraser

Date: 11/19/2009 12:27:00 PM

Nice write Sara >> James

Daver Austin

Date: 11/19/2009 9:25:00 AM

"Wrinkles and grey," boy how I can get into this one! Nice image. Love, daver

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/19/2009 9:17:00 AM

A wonderful piece. Yes, we have much to be thankful for. I laughed when I seen the Wrinkles and Gray. I am getting there slowly I hope. God Bless Phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/19/2009 7:21:00 AM

I love this piece with it's gratitude, and honesty. Well done, Sara. Love, Carrie

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 11/19/2009 6:43:00 AM

as the gentle breeze touches my wrinkles and grey..........luv ds line.luv d entire stuff!Had to say it again.

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 11/19/2009 6:35:00 AM

Its a good one!