Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Wrinkles and Grey

Very impressionistic pinkish red horizon
At the very beginning of the slowly settling sun
Small crescent moon shining as the day is done
As the gentle breeze touches my wrinkles and grey
I want to thank you God for this glorious day

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William Kershaw November 19, 2009 at 8:05 PM Sara, wrinkles and grey? Great line and an excellent write. I always pictured you as bonny and fair with a glint of auburn in your tresses. No wrinkles to be found in my Sara image. Love, Will

Robert A. Dufresne November 19, 2009 at 6:01 PM simply beautiful, Sara

Colleen Bono November 19, 2009 at 5:40 PM well written.Yes GOD thank you for this day.

James Fraser November 19, 2009 at 12:27 PM Nice write Sara >> James

Daver Austin November 19, 2009 at 9:25 AM "Wrinkles and grey," boy how I can get into this one! Nice image. Love, daver

Phyllis Babcock November 19, 2009 at 9:17 AM A wonderful piece. Yes, we have much to be thankful for. I laughed when I seen the Wrinkles and Gray. I am getting there slowly I hope. God Bless Phyl

Carrie Richards November 19, 2009 at 7:21 AM I love this piece with it's gratitude, and honesty. Well done, Sara. Love, Carrie

K K Iloduba Jnr November 19, 2009 at 6:43 AM as the gentle breeze touches my wrinkles and grey..........luv ds line.luv d entire stuff!Had to say it again.

K K Iloduba Jnr November 19, 2009 at 6:35 AM Its a good one!