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Wriggle and a Breath of Air

gray sky's angry flash

it's stomach loud hungry roars


earthworm for dinner


6/26/2017

birdrainstormhaiku

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Chris Green

June 27, 2017 at 6:09 AM

What a wonderful Haiku Eve. This was beautiful.

Eve Roper

June 27, 2017 at 6:51 PM

Thank you so much, Chris, always enjoy your inspiring compliments ~*

Joanna Daniel

June 26, 2017 at 11:32 PM

What a haiku, Eve! Amazing!!

Eve Roper

June 27, 2017 at 6:49 PM

Thank you for your inspirational comment, Jo, I'll keep you around ~*

Daniel Turner

June 26, 2017 at 9:49 PM

Yumm with three m's:) Great haiku Mrs Eve:)

Eve Roper

June 27, 2017 at 6:45 PM

Thank you, Daniel,,, I think the birdy like it :) ~*

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2017 at 9:21 PM

I love that last line. You got in your juxtaposition!

Eve Roper

June 27, 2017 at 6:44 PM

Thank you, Andrea, just trying... ~*

Jan Allison

June 26, 2017 at 7:06 PM

wonderful haiku Eve and the picture is super:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

June 27, 2017 at 6:42 PM

thank you so much, Jan ~*

Dale Gregory Cozart

June 26, 2017 at 6:43 PM

This is very clever. A thought: do you mean "Wriggle AND a breath.."? Just asking.

Eve Roper

June 26, 2017 at 10:02 PM

Dale I'm glad you did, rather you help and just be ignored of my mistakes and feel like an idiot after wards when I find them myself.. So thank you very much

Dale Gregory Cozart

June 26, 2017 at 7:17 PM

Just trying to help.

Eve Roper

June 26, 2017 at 7:09 PM

yes your are right, Dale, made me look...