Wrathful Sky -Diddeax O

Lightning illuminates a tornado 
 A double image of furiousness
Primal


Diddeaux O tercet
for Debbie Guzzi Haiku Wannabee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Orozco Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Short and so powerful this image is! :). Truly you are of much talent - Edward
Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 7:39 PM
You had such a good line 3, the word that CAN be used as a refrain. To place higher you needed to write more, for me more is always better, the form has the opportunity for a refrain, why not use it? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 6:55 PM
It really is Primal..congrats on your win. BG
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Enjoyed reading this unique and creative work..Thanks for stopping by..I am honored that you would fav it..Sara
Horsman Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 2:48 PM
clever poetry, so very visual...
Jacks Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 6:00 PM
It reminds me of this past storm we had it was feirce and a terror to behold. Of this poem like the storm is beautiful in my eyes
Phillips Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Hi Suz, nice captivating poem. I like this line "Lightning illuminates a tornado"very powerful line.
Hamilton Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 2:17 PM
good write Shadow x
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:20 PM
suz, I finally gave this form a look see, and I think I should be able to come up with something. There are some pretty interesting forms for us to try out!
De Burca Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 3:42 PM
I like this. I am not familiar with this form like Andrea but I enjoyed this. Well done.
Cee Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:10 AM
nothing to say but great! ;)
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 11:58 PM
- The "evil" comes with its power .... well done, SuZ !! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 11:02 PM
Hmm a double content poem so fiery in dis new form! Wows!
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 10:40 PM
so THIS is diddeax? I GOTTA study that out. Well, it sure looks like you did a great job of it. And I'm so glad you understand the joys of handsies!!
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