Wrapped Up In You

I'm caught in the cage
of mind turning pages
Remembering to mention
You have my attention
So frightfully afraid
I just have to say
You drip , sweet nectar 
into my rhymes
with honey flowing
into my lines
This write, is a fire
ignited by desires
All 
wrapped up in you
a reality that's true
Give me your heart
it'll be the start
Of
Something amazing
a lover blazing
With
Me into you
wrapped apon dew
Dropped in the rain
forgetting the pain
Feeling the gain
of loving again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:10 PM
I do like what you came up with, Holly. Romantic and playful:) Well done!
Bohto Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 8:01 PM
thanks Daniel. thanks for the visit. I'm always encouraged to keep writing when people appreciate my experimentation with poetry.
Green Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Where will you put the bow? :) Just kidding...this was fun and playful and sensual and the perfect poetic Christmas gift.
Green Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Well, I'm sure you decorated it beautifully. : )
Bohto Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Who's the playful one? lol. Thanks Chris. Had to edit that last christmas line. I'm glad I caught it the "Nick" of time.
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