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Wrapped Up In You

I'm caught in the cage of mind turning pages Remembering to mention You have my attention So frightfully afraid I just have to say You drip , sweet nectar into my rhymes with honey flowing into my lines This write, is a fire ignited by desires All wrapped up in you a reality that's true Give me your heart it'll be the start Of Something amazing a lover blazing With Me into you wrapped apon dew Dropped in the rain forgetting the pain Feeling the gain of loving again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/7/2016 5:10:00 PM
I do like what you came up with, Holly. Romantic and playful:) Well done!
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Holly Bohto
Date: 12/7/2016 8:01:00 PM
thanks Daniel. thanks for the visit. I'm always encouraged to keep writing when people appreciate my experimentation with poetry.
Date: 12/7/2016 1:17:00 PM
Where will you put the bow? :) Just kidding...this was fun and playful and sensual and the perfect poetic Christmas gift.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 5:10:00 PM
Well, I'm sure you decorated it beautifully. : )
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Holly Bohto
Date: 12/7/2016 4:52:00 PM
Who's the playful one? lol. Thanks Chris. Had to edit that last christmas line. I'm glad I caught it the "Nick" of time.

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