Wrapped In Deli

I see Mars-mystery in your mind, 
the global warming in your lips
I would like to be wrapped in you
as meats get wrapped in deli.

Your eyes are clear September sky
your rich bosom March madness
you are in vision of my old eyes
you have all the things in you
that any man will desire.
You are the breathe of Old Saturn
To me you are vision of Pluto.

Growing older, you are in my vision
Even though you are far far away.
Rich by passion as the Indian monsoon
Poor with impatience as Canadian Winter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/19/2014 11:24:00 PM
Dr. Ram Such a sweet and loving write for a special person. Your passion and longing are evident in each line. Thank you for the nice comment on my Alphabet poem.
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Date: 6/22/2010 6:36:00 AM
Very passionate, descriptive and expressive verse that you have penned in this one..Keep the inspirational pen flowing and filling our days with warm poems to read..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2010 10:45:00 AM
I can not tell you what it meant to me to be able to read your poetry today DR. I wish you the best in your writing and hope each day takes you to greater heights in it. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:26:00 PM
A lovely write Dr. Ram and the comparisons are quite unique and interesting in your lines.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:08:00 PM
Excellent poetry my friend...:JP]
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Date: 5/11/2010 6:07:00 PM
I enjoyed this...the longing so evident in the wistfulness of such a vision. Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:18:00 PM
bravo, nice one you have here, enjoyed the write
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