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Autumn Reverie Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul

October 27, 2023

I was wrapped in autumn's embrace ~ as she shed her withered leaves of lace her gown was crimson and gold ~ autumn's reverie in meadow and wold* she travels upon windswept chords ~ in apple orchards and fields of gourds autumn nights beneath a harvest moon ~ I hear haunting calls of a loon *hilly region

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2023 8:54:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your Monoku write again. Enjoy your day/win writing away........

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2023 8:56:00 AM

what amazing imagery Lin, having read this beauty I am going to have to re think my lines! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 9:02:00 AM

lol You are such an adorable advocate of my poetry. You, chickee, should never alter your lines.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/27/2023 3:17:00 PM

breathtaking images in your poem, Lin. I loved her gown of crimson and gold as well as the haunting calls of a loon. May you have a pleasant evening, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 9:02:00 AM

I've always loved personifying the seasons. Thanks for your ever-glowing remarks on my poetry, Sara. Enjoy your weekend.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/27/2023 3:12:00 PM

Sweet! Crimson and gold, harvest moon, all we need is a few brisk mornings. Easy read. Hoping you are well my friend.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 9:01:00 AM

I'll be having a few brisk mornings next week, Danny, and since you're a wee bit north of me, I suspect you will be, too. Thanks for commenting and you know I'm well.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/27/2023 2:58:00 PM

Lovely autumnal poetry Lin, in splendour of the fall… Belle

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 9:00:00 AM

Thanks so much for your sweet thoughts, Belle.

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/27/2023 2:03:00 PM

A brilliant quartet of rhyming Monokus Lin, so adeptly put together, with fabulous imagery in each one, and a nice old English wold, very rarely seen on the soup, great one for contest, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thank you a bunch, David. I've read many books set in English, Irish and Scottish regions. I've always loved the languages and use words from them occasionally... do ya ken, lad? Rhyming Monoku are a fun challenge for me.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/27/2023 1:54:00 PM

What creative/fun Monoku writes. I enjoyed everyone. Have a great day/weekend...............

Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Paula.

John Lawless

Date: 10/27/2023 11:11:00 AM

Oh Stop it!! You're making Autumn blush.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 11:18:00 AM

Lol. You’re going to make me blush. Thank you sincerely, John.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/27/2023 10:21:00 AM

Lin, once again you have wrapped me up into a blanket of pure delight as you survey the beautiful elements of autumn like an eagle soaring over the magnificent season of autumn. Breathtaking! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings of autumn joy.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 11:18:00 AM

Oh, Sam your reviews are always filled with comments that support and encourage me to dig a little deeper to find the right words to express my sentiments. Thank you for being able to do that for me and others you so graciously offer your thoughts.

Jay Narain

Date: 10/27/2023 9:54:00 AM

Nice sets of monoku.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/27/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jay.