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Wraiths Rising

Red tore down footpath
heartbeat pulsed, steady and strong
wisp of radiance 

10/10/2017

Poetry Contest: Halloween Senryu 
Sponsored by: Laura Loo  
How Many Syllables 5 7 5

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Roy Pett Date: 10/24/2017 10:40:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, great Senryu and brilliant title. :)) Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 10/24/2017 7:32:00 AM Sounds like she was eager to see the ghosts Eve. I like your point of view. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/24/2017 7:17:00 AM Fascinating, dear Eve! Congrats! <3 Kim Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 10/24/2017 5:39:00 AM pulsing heartbeats are always creepy in my eyes. and I learned a new word! thank you and congrats sweet Eve :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2017 3:36:00 PM oh, I love that image "wisp of radiance". it's so cool. Congrats on the win, Eve. Login to Reply

John Michaels Date: 10/23/2017 1:27:00 PM Nice imagery, Eve - and love that title!! Congrats on your win! Regards, John. Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 10/23/2017 11:01:00 AM Congratulations Eve... Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/23/2017 7:26:00 AM Congratulations Eve :) xomo! Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 10/23/2017 6:18:00 AM Congratulations on your great win, Eve. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/11/2017 4:20:00 PM Interesting contest entry..Very descriptive..Reads like a good contender to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my blog page..Sara Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 10/11/2017 10:36:00 AM You describe the feeling of fear well in this senryu... Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/11/2017 10:39:00 AM Thank you, Silent One. Hugs Eve

Russell Sivey Date: 10/11/2017 8:13:00 AM Wow the fear of a racing heart, as the path is foreboding, is there silence emanated therein?! I loved reading this glorious write this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/11/2017 10:38:00 AM Thank you, Russell, . Hugs Eve

Darren White Date: 10/11/2017 5:22:00 AM oooh, really scary Halloween senryu :) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/11/2017 10:38:00 AM Thank you, Darren! Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/11/2017 5:11:00 AM A scary experience! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/11/2017 10:37:00 AM Thank you, Vijay, hugs Eve

Jan Allison Date: 10/11/2017 3:03:00 AM Great imagery Eve, good Luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/11/2017 10:35:00 AM Thank you, Jan, hugs Eve

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/11/2017 2:25:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. I love it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/11/2017 10:33:00 AM Thank you, Ravi ! Hugs Eve

Juli- Michelle Date: 10/11/2017 12:02:00 AM Ooh, so appropriate for the season, I love it! Good luck in the contest, Eve :) Love, Juli-Michelle Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/11/2017 10:32:00 AM Thank you, Juli, hugs Eve

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/10/2017 8:53:00 PM oh la la Spooky! Loved this eve! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 10/10/2017 8:54:00 PM hahaha, you always make me smile with your presence. Hello Arthur, thank you Hugs Eve