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Red tore down footpath heartbeat pulsed, steady and strong wisp of radiance 10/10/2017 Poetry Contest: Halloween Senryu Sponsored by: Laura Loo How Many Syllables 5 7 5

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Roy Pett

Date: 10/24/2017 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, great Senryu and brilliant title. :))

James Inman

Date: 10/24/2017 7:32:00 AM

Sounds like she was eager to see the ghosts Eve. I like your point of view.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2017 7:17:00 AM

Fascinating, dear Eve! Congrats! <3 Kim

Lu Loo

Date: 10/24/2017 5:39:00 AM

pulsing heartbeats are always creepy in my eyes. and I learned a new word! thank you and congrats sweet Eve :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2017 3:36:00 PM

oh, I love that image "wisp of radiance". it's so cool. Congrats on the win, Eve.

John Michaels

Date: 10/23/2017 1:27:00 PM

Nice imagery, Eve - and love that title!! Congrats on your win! Regards, John.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/23/2017 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations Eve...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/23/2017 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations Eve :) xomo!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/23/2017 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win, Eve.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/11/2017 4:20:00 PM

Interesting contest entry..Very descriptive..Reads like a good contender to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my blog page..Sara

Silent One

Date: 10/11/2017 10:36:00 AM

You describe the feeling of fear well in this senryu...

Eve Roper
Date: 10/11/2017 10:39:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One. Hugs Eve

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2017 8:13:00 AM

Wow the fear of a racing heart, as the path is foreboding, is there silence emanated therein?! I loved reading this glorious write this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Eve Roper
Date: 10/11/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thank you, Russell, . Hugs Eve