Beata Agustin Poet Other

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Poetic form: Tanka Prose

 

Woven Worlds

Two worlds grip my heart --- the carnal and the divine. Faith* upholds my soul midst gratefulness to the Lord for redemption.  Good health moves my body for reaching-out pursuits.  Here am I praying for the strengthening of my physical and spiritual life, since dysfunction occurs if any of the two gets wearied or debilitated…  
countenance does smile
   eyes exude mirth of a babe
	     heart throbs with blest peace
worship brings revival surge
   ministry impacts prevail  

*Ephesians 2:8-9 For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God: Not of works, lest any man should boast.

April 2, 2024
8th place, "Woven Worlds - TANKA PROSE" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Suzette Richards; judged on 4/5/2024

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Linda Alice Fowler April 6, 2024 at 11:51 AM Congratulations Beata! We hope for good health as we age. Faith keeps us moving. :)

Suzette Richards April 5, 2024 at 1:46 AM Congratulations on your placement in my Woven Worlds – Tanka Prose contest, Beata. Thank you for your support. Suzette

Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2024 at 1:30 PM As we get older and, or endure physical disablities, some things are harder to do but most can do something within their boundaries. I am having a problem with a tendon in my wrist. (oh what Jesus must have suffered!) Us women have so many chores to do so I just keep doing what I can. God sees you and your beautiful soul, dear one!