Woven Verses

When i'm at work weaving verses
          I have my stringent mindset
Trying to explore the hidden psyche 
          And discover the unseen stars, 
Loosely chained in the universal ken.
      As I peer into the vision of thoughts
With naked eyes of insight
      I'm Dumbstruck with vulnerable views
Akin to some star gazer who had ever fixed his eyes
Who; whilst surfing finds mind boggling objects.
          It's a pure bliss-sans a reason
For; its the grit that keeps up the pace
      Of labor, where the instincts of intuitive
Keep a track on the moving mind waves.
     This brings them down to pen in its pensive mood
     Whilst in its exploration of thought as he broods on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kelley Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 8:45 AM
What a great write!! I enjoyed your use of words and the flow. Thank you for sharing. Xx
Rao Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:50 AM
Hi Thanks for your review If poetry should flow it should flow down As a stream from a vale unto the down dale. Keep reading..keep writing Regards Rao
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