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Wounds Are Hurtful Ifl

You belong somewhere in the vast cosmos where the idiomatic idioms were born I started to wonder and cry, Lord, have mercy; this is not I. I felt as if years had passed! along with age! farewell oh, we soar to an infinite place to dwell. The last goodbye was the hardest, we never got to say our final adieu remember how we danced near stardust? They say that tears are a sign of weakness, so I held back my tears to ease the pain, I buried it in the hollows of my heart. Yet, they poured into my empty soul tearing me apart with deep cuts even the most idyllic love must die was it not because of love's cries? will leave a scar to stultify it... I shall bleed and grieve till the wounds heal making room for unworn pain, to experience sorrow again.
Written: February 05, 2023 1st place contest winner I Felt Like Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina
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Hind Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:03 PM
This was quite beautiful. Loved the last part.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 5:32 AM
- Yes, it leaves deep scars, Las - A sensitive poem, beautifully written - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away..........................
George Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:31 PM
"They say that tears are a sign of weakness, so I held back my tears to ease the pain, I buried it in the hollows of my heart. " It so happens especially to men. A very poignant poem tugging at the heart chords. Congratulations on your first place win.
Alex Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:20 PM
"idiomatic idioms", "even the most idyllic love must die" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 5:29 PM
Lasaad, you have expressed your pain and sadness so beautiful. (If that makes sense) Undoubtably- the last good-byes are the hardest. Love this! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Charlie
Buhagiar Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 2:19 AM
So sad to lose a loved one once had. Best for a win.
Daniel Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 10:32 PM
Deep and painful, Sotto:)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 5:21 PM
Lasaad, you have amplified your wound resoundingly, and the efforts you dealt, were equally remarkable, all my best, Aloha William
Tor Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 4:38 PM
Wow this is heartfelt and love lost to mourn. A favorite for me. For this depressed state I was in many years ago and when I read this it was like it was written for me and my pain. Excellent words that touch deep and sad memories and thoughts are brought back through these touching words my friend. Thank you for posting...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 1:59 PM
we never got to say our final adieu remember how we danced near stardust? so I held back my tears to ease the pain, I buried it in the hollows of my heart. Yet, they poured into my empty soul tearing me apart with deep cuts//Heartfelt, Lasaad!
McBride  Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Great inspiring poem for all, love this my friend : )
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