Wounds

A kiss, softer than a shadow,
Is all we dare desire
As intimate involvement filled
With all of passions’ fire

More might crush those feelings
We need to keep us sane
Or like a moth, be consumed
In the heat of Passions’ Flame.

To those who inflicted wounds
Now in healing states
Know that somewhere up ahead
A crushing fate awaits.

The one we need is out there
But fearful are we still
To drop our guard, reveal ourselves
No, there’ll be no trust until …

Our confidence of who we are
And believe: The best will be …
When we get past the Hurt
Inflicted recently

Only then, when scars are healed
When self-confidence resumes
Can we again enjoy
Passion’s grand perfumes.

    Remember …
Forgiveness is the perfume a flower leaves on the shoe that crushed it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/26/2014 4:04:00 PM
That is a great poem, Jack. That last line is very powerful. Forgiveness can move the hardest of hearts without that heart even realizing it is happening. forgiveness is one of the greatest forms of love. Very well written, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:54:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. Forgiveness, for some, is an extremely difficult effort, in fact it can be impossible. But ... without it the "damaged" party becomes even more so, and sadly, that excessive, self-inflicted damage may be come permanent. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one, Robert. Jack C
Date: 5/22/2014 8:59:00 AM
thank you for the comment on my comemnt
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Date: 5/21/2014 10:47:00 AM
Jack, a clever write... Thanks for the vice... Linda
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:50:00 AM
I so appreciate your comment, Linda ... and I thank you for it. I'm flattered that such a poetess as yourself reads my submissions ... it truly is a humbling honor. Jack C.
Date: 5/21/2014 10:24:00 AM
great poem I love ending statement, it is very true for everyone.
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Nathan. The ability to attain forgiveness is, in my estimation, a blessing for all who sincerely attempt to own it. Jack C
Date: 5/21/2014 5:52:00 AM
Jack, I love your similies... The last line of this poem... I will remember it always.. I wish everyone in the world could know it...
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:54:00 AM
Thank you, Arlene. You are still one of only a very, very few who have elicited tears from me with you written word .... Thank you, again.
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