Wounded Without

Balance escapes malcontent minds
  withered in worry, gazed through the blinds
Disconnected with the world outside
  
   Yearn for release, all peace ceases
Guarded, distrustful, suspected malfeasance
  Weary of those heart guarded treasons
People's intentions change like the seasons
     
  Now suspicious always...in all ways 
My mind narrows down like hallways
  Carefully weighing the words that they're saying
Watchful of wolves as they creep in their preying
  Unworthy of praying, the shepherd's off playing
     unguarded sheep... ripe for the sleighing

Forever wanting of tender loving
 Feeling undeserving,
                  a dark cloud above me
A wounded creature, cornered and lonely
  licking wounds, longing for her to console me
        I lay here empty............................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/24/2009 7:53:00 PM
Hi Steve, "People's intentions change like the seasons" evokes provocative images, and it is certainly true in our world today. Great work! And thanks for reading "Lt. Willy on Trial." I did not see the movie "Valley of Elah." Do you know when it was released? I'll try to find it. If you recommend it, it must be good! Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2009 7:38:00 PM
A very deeply moving piece as my heart feels you... Our perception of time as we anguish these feelings may seem as though time stands still almost but in reality there is no real time, only what we calculate as humans. onward we go to experience life for all that it is and can be :) my best regards with love, Lucinda
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Date: 2/15/2009 5:20:00 PM
Raw and emotional, this piece creates a vivid tone. Very well done, Steve! Donna
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Date: 2/15/2009 2:48:00 PM
Powerful poem with much for the reader to think about. I've already read it twice. Thank you for sharing this well-written poem with us. Karen
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Date: 2/15/2009 1:27:00 PM
great rhyming and images. you've got the tallent. John H Loving III
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