Wounded Wanderings - Picture Perfect

A gray and dreary sky was drawn this morn though love was in my heart of hearts aglow, as I called out to you, a rift was torn, and through the rift, so silent, fell the snow. Ah, you have passed my heart, my love; I know, a barefoot specter follows through the white. Once warmed by passion’s kiss and love’s delight now, only memories fill my beating heart, and I can but shiver in the dead of night awaiting the cock’s crow, I will depart.
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Ryerson Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 5:19 PM
The last two lines absolutely knocked me out!...As Carly Simon sang, 'Nobody does it better' Congrats, mon cher - Tim
A  Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 9:07 PM
WELL DONE. SKAT
A   Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 8:05 PM
nice win....PD.............. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 3:17 PM
I love this kind of theme that you chose, Debs, for my contest. Also your meter and imagery are wonderful! Congrats for your win.
Arowolo Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 3:11 PM
Lovely piece,Deb....Congrats on your win...
Richards Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Yours are always picture perfect in my estimation !! No exception here!! Congratulations !
May Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:50 PM
very nice write...congrats on your win
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations, your poem has an old world feel to it.
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 4:07 PM
This is really nice, Debs. I just love the lyrical quality of it. Sad poems are so great. Congrats on your win.
Merryman Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Debbie. I'm thrilled to share the honor of 1st place with you. Love, Kim
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 7:19 AM
a great study on contrast, debbie... cheers to you for the great win! :) huggs!
Foster Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your win with this splendid work. It was a pleasure to read...
Song Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 7:47 PM
The emotions expressed in this winning poem are strong and touch me deeply, Debbie. I can relate completely! Congrats on a wondrous win!! Gwendolen
Bunton Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations!
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 1:53 PM
Debbie, fabulous write. You pour a lot of emotion into your work, and it shows. I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on placing on Brian's winners' list........................S.Ronthorpe
Scholtz Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie, love Elizabeth
Taylor Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent, well deserved win. Great job. Nice going. luv Ralph
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 11:30 AM
I love this one Debi.I' m faving this poem as I can enjoy its metered rhythm very much.Congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:07 AM
congrats Debbie on a super first place win for lovely words luv...and thankxx for my win ..so honored u liked it .. learning as we go ..luv..
Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 9:41 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Brian Strand's~ "Any Poem with Max 12 Lines" contest *Debbie*. Love, Carol
Eastman Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Very touching write. Congratulations on the write.
Brown Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Romance" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 6:13 PM
I can't remember if I used this dizain form before. Whatever it is, I really like how you used it!! Congratulations on a great poem's win.
Merryman Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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